I dont really know what you guys think about this, It was hard to get the right part 'right'.

 

 

 

Worked 30-45 mins on this.

 

 

 

 

I made it for Speedofsound, he will use it if he likes it :)

 

 

 

CC please, I want to improve on making signatures like this.

 

And if you have an alternative for the right part, tell me.

Too cluttered, nothing stands out and its just sort of... plain. I mean, the little brighter part which has the text sort of stands out -- but not enough.

 

 

 

Dunno, just nothing seems very interesting about it, I think it has a lot to do with the cluttered feeling.

 

 

 

The text is poor too, and it doesn't really fit with the image. It should be tilted a bit more so its more in tune with how that metal [bleep]e is bending.

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways you need to learn to brush on your C4D render. Just making one isn't enough usually, I usually just use it as a base.

I don't think it's bad but it's too dark for me and cluttered llike nadril said.

I made a (quick) example to show how I usually go around making C4D based signatures. Now, granted this is kind of around a new technique I've been using but hopefully it will help.

 

 

 

 

 

 

.PSD File Download

 

 

 

 

 

Now of course it isn't really a finished product. The C4D render could stick out more, my brushings a bit boring (all blue) and what not -- but it shows the basic technique.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hopefully it'll help.

 

PSD Download

 

 

 

 

 

Here's a little more involved one sort of using the same technique. I'm bored and felt like doing it.

Thanks alot Nad, this will really help me out.

 

Ive just downloaded Wreckage, I hope I will improve with this.

Woopidoo made me a revised version because I told him I thought that the top left looked a little bland. Notice that he also changed the text.

 

 

 

I like it overall, I really appreciate you making me a signature.

 

 

 

 

 

(Revised version is what I'm using now)

What nadril said...