Well I been seeing alot of bad first attempt pixel posts around here so I decided to post this. Its not my first but Ive never posted any of my other works so I figured Id post this to see what yall thought.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My friend said it looked nice and I thought so too. I had an idea for a b/g but last nite I thought of this and it looked neat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There ya go! Rate and tell whats wrong with it or what could be improved on plz!

Kinda simplistic and "neat" if you will...I think maybe make the character actually touching the walls, unless he's supposed to be miming and all....

He is touching the walls :P And ya, I like how it turned out all nice and simple like that! :) Thx!

im assuming it's a male

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. The legs.. the are too feminine, men ar not shaped like that

 

 

 

2. the hair seems to be put on his head like a wig, not attatched to it

 

 

 

3. his feet are in an odd pose and uncomfortable direction :o

 

 

 

4. his thumb is the longest of his finger? and his fingers are too thin

 

 

 

5. his shirt also seems to contour to his bodu oddly also. (femininely)

 

 

 

5. his shirt fits to his pex smoothly, yet bags out on his arms, shirst are not usually built like this

I like the character, though I've seen it before just now it has a bg and border...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its cool.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wooo 1200th post :)

im assuming it's a male

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. The legs.. the are too feminine, men ar not shaped like that

 

 

 

2. the hair seems to be put on his head like a wig, not attatched to it

 

 

 

3. his feet are in an odd pose and uncomfortable direction :o

 

 

 

4. his thumb is the longest of his finger? and his fingers are too thin

 

 

 

5. his shirt also seems to contour to his bodu oddly also. (femininely)

 

 

 

5. his shirt fits to his pex smoothly, yet bags out on his arms, shirst are not usually built like this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thx for comments!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats how male legs seem to be built to me, but if you can, could you show me a drawin of the differences in the 2 plz :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Im fixing the fingers on the right hand atm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sleeves just do that cuz I like how they look :P I may try to shade the pex so the stick out some.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His feet look ok to me tho :P Thx for all the comments again, Ill work on em! :D

 

 

 

6. his shirt fits to his pex smoothly, yet bags out on his arms, shirst are not usually built like this

 

 

 

You've never seen the mime shirts in RS have you?

 

im assuming it's a male

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. The legs.. the are too feminine, men ar not shaped like that

 

 

 

2. the hair seems to be put on his head like a wig, not attatched to it

 

 

 

3. his feet are in an odd pose and uncomfortable direction :o

 

 

 

4. his thumb is the longest of his finger? and his fingers are too thin

 

 

 

5. his shirt also seems to contour to his bodu oddly also. (femininely)

 

 

 

5. his shirt fits to his pex smoothly, yet bags out on his arms, shirst are not usually built like this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thx for comments!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats how male legs seem to be built to me, but if you can, could you show me a drawin of the differences in the 2 plz :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Im fixing the fingers on the right hand atm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sleeves just do that cuz I like how they look :P I may try to shade the pex so the stick out some.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His feet look ok to me tho :P Thx for all the comments again, Ill work on em! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

about the legs... no.. just no.. there in no way male.

 

 

 

males atleast.. well.. males with a good build have very musculair upper legs.. and somewhat smaller uhh under legs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now what you did is the hips.. big hips are feminine and in no way male.. i have yet to see a male with big hips..

 

 

 

and you made the "under legs" to big.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

for reference how male legs look like, check my sig (i dont mean to sound full of myself)

Mimes have always crept me out... so umm... well nice sha... *runs away*