DaNkaTa Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 This is the first sig i ever made it was for a friend of mine: I then made a sig for myself: Please can you give me feedback and if you want a sig contact me and i will arrange something. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 *shakes head* never post your first art work... 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gehackte Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 The first one is yes how to say it not really my style the render is not well blended try to find better render. and the second one is pretty good try to make the render blend more maybe and try to make the background some more but i give it 8/10 for how it is already How does 20 minutes turn into 2.5 hours? Was your math perhaps magical math? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Looney_Dude6 Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 :shame: the 1st one is not good :/ you should make it 1 with the background, feel the picture :P but, you can do better, if you take more time : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jneevbe Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 What Looney said :P Use http://www.pixel2life.com for good tuts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robo Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 the 1st ones bad but the second one it pretty good for a second attempt, wat program are u using? and like the others said tuts are always helpful :thumbsup: Sig by thru,yaff, ty both :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmo_killer6 Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 Both seem very simply made and could be reporudced within a matter of 3 or 4 latyers. For example the second one is just C4D with a render with a glow slapped on it then text. From what I can see that's about three layers. try to make it more invovled to look nicer. You should practice more before posting again. Try using brushes and creating things that are more than jsut a render slapped on a background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushrock Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 *shakes head* never post your first art work... *shakes head*...Honestly, why not? If the craftsmanship is bad, then give him tips to fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmo_killer6 Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 *shakes head* never post your first art work... *shakes head*...Honestly, why not? If the craftsmanship is bad, then give him tips to fix it. Don't post your first ever sig. To be quite honest with you, they are hardly ever decent. Remember, if you think it doesn't look good, it doesn't. For those of you who truely feel that you are hot stuff, ask for a second opinion such as family member, friend, or messenger buddy if you want a real opinion as to if it's any good. If they give good feedback, post away. That's why. Most of the time giving crits on first works won't help much. You really need to learn what you can do with a prgram before sigs start looking decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 *shakes head* never post your first art work... *shakes head*...Honestly, why not? If the craftsmanship is bad, then give him tips to fix it. art like this cant be fixed, he needs to put more time an effort, if what your implying is, i am not willing to help, id help with from ground one. but posting your FIRST artwork is setting yourself up for failure in most cases, because, people are going to be hard on you, then, you arnt going to want to make anything anymore because people were so hard on your last art work.. he needs to look ar tutorials, he needs to get to know the program. im an intermediate GFX maker (i spose) so if i tell him how to fix it chances are he wont know what im talking about neways. to get what we are saying, you got to look at it from an artist POV and then decide. evem thouhg you are a beginner to art. 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushrock Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Oh crap, totally slipped my mind that it was a rule. Sorry guys. I'm just going to retract that statement sort of...:oops: But anyone who gives up art for criticism is...well......:uhh: What were you trying to say in that last sentence? I don't understand it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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