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k well, i dont know how many times this has to be said, but, never post your first art work..

 

 

 

 

 

The render needs to be blended.

 

the background doesnt look right, for the render

 

the colors dont match

 

the font isnt blended

 

and you need a border.

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I'd say that people are judging art from their own opinions. "Colors don't match." I mean...? It's one thing to not personally like it, but to say it's bad art...I don't know. I just started getting into art, but I think I might be right about this. Or maybe not. :P

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I have to agree with yaff on this one. It doesn't seem like there is much effort in pulling this together. And what's with the SAMPLE written across it? It has your name on it, and who would want it anyways?

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Well, poor craftsmanship is one thing. But, I mean, it's not all bad...Don't be so quick to judge, you guys! :)

 

 

 

as you said, its all opinion, agree or disagree, its up to you!

 

 

 

but, from an art POV its beginner, not much to it, not that great, but if he sticks to it, he will get good.

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Well, poor craftsmanship is one thing. But, I mean, it's not all bad...Don't be so quick to judge, you guys! :)

 

 

 

OK, what's good about it?

 

Well...TBH I don't personally like it, but it's a pretty cute animation, and with a little work I bet he could make it better. It's his first try, and I don't see the problem with posting first attempts. That M.C. Escher hand was my first attempt at (somewhat) pro drawing using actual techniques, and I didn't totally suck on that, did I? They have to learn somewhere!

 

 

 

All I'm saying is to not be so harsh on criticizing. Posting something like "urgh don't post first trys" and leaving it at that isn't helpful.

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I'd say that people are judging art from their own opinions.

 

/obvious

 

That's the only way you can judge art.

 

No, I meant because of personal tastes. I basically mean not on the craftsmanship but on the colors or something. I don't know; I don't want to start a fight! I just started art!

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I'd say that people are judging art from their own opinions.

 

/obvious

 

That's the only way you can judge art.

 

No, I meant because of personal tastes. I basically mean not on the craftsmanship but on the colors or something. I don't know; I don't want to start a fight! I just started art!

 

 

 

It's a matter of your own opinions. He asked for us to judge, so we shall judge. If I think the picture would look better if the color matched, I will say so. That doesn't mean he has to change it, it's his expression after all.

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I'd say that people are judging art from their own opinions.

 

/obvious

 

That's the only way you can judge art.

 

No, I meant because of personal tastes. I basically mean not on the craftsmanship but on the colors or something. I don't know; I don't want to start a fight! I just started art!

 

 

 

It's a matter of your own opinions. He asked for us to judge, so we shall judge. If I think the picture would look better if the color matched, I will say so. That doesn't mean he has to change it, it's his expression after all.

 

Yeah I know, it just seems that people are deeming art "bad" too quickly. But hey, it's just my opinion. I'm a novice at art, anyways.

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I'd say that people are judging art from their own opinions. "Colors don't match." I mean...? It's one thing to not personally like it, but to say it's bad art...I don't know. I just started getting into art, but I think I might be right about this. Or maybe not. :P

 

 

 

Some colors naturally match or clash, its not really a matter of opinion in that case.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Pretty much just listen to what yaff said. Beyond that I got nothin'.

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I'd say that people are judging art from their own opinions.

 

/obvious

 

That's the only way you can judge art.

 

No, I meant because of personal tastes. I basically mean not on the craftsmanship but on the colors or something. I don't know; I don't want to start a fight! I just started art!

 

 

 

It's a matter of your own opinions. He asked for us to judge, so we shall judge. If I think the picture would look better if the color matched, I will say so. That doesn't mean he has to change it, it's his expression after all.

 

Yeah I know, it just seems that people are deeming art "bad" too quickly. But hey, it's just my opinion. I'm a novice at art, anyways.

 

 

 

no one said it was bad, we are just trying to help him out, maybe not with this sig, but sigs he will make later on, we see where your coming from though, and i hope you can see where we are coming from.

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