D-Gade Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Well, my first try Completed...CC plx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeToX Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 no horizon line, what is that think is holding the 2nd char? axe handle? but nice anyway o and btw that with axe handle dosnt look realistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 i think its a club... 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-Gade Posted April 27, 2005 Author Share Posted April 27, 2005 Its an ogre lol :lol: Anyway im done with it, so any CC would be appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 line works blocky your shadings awefully blocky can notice it easy the a on your texts also bad "darkgide" his legs are at snapping point the ogre has no shoulders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bjbsk8er2 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Fix the shading... :? Fix your line work... lots of blockness... More stuff in bg. His right hand is really weird. Is that a legends cape... :? Ogre looks kinda small compared to the person. Bjbsk8er2 : Playing since 2001. : 126 Combat Since June 2006 : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Its ok, better than some of the other first attempts... Ok so heres what i like about it: - you actually used shading, good for you! - the plants, they look cool. - hands on the guy, nicely done. What i dont like: - Black outlines, not always a good thing. - The outlines are kind of rough, clean them up a bit - The sky goes from sunny day to evening. - dont use gradient like shading. - there is lava near grass land? forest fire! - the cape is badly drawn. - are those rune legs or pants? make the armour details. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Its ok, better than some of the other first attempts... Ok so heres what i like about it: - you actually used shading, good for you! - the plants, they look cool. - hands on the guy, nicely done. What i dont like: - Black outlines, not always a good thing. - The outlines are kind of rough, clean them up a bit - The sky goes from sunny day to evening. - dont use gradient like shading. - there is lava near grass land? forest fire! - the cape is badly drawn. - are those rune legs or pants? make the armour details. lava and grass not a good thing but it could be in a pit in the ground like lava collecting after errution but theres no volcano ok i'll shut up :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 ok he's running out of the lava in to the right side of the screen ignoring the yellowish green thing completely! conclusion.. hes running a marathon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 can nobody honestly tell that its an ogre??? :roll: axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 can nobody honestly tell that its an ogre??? :roll: i do but it looks more like a yellow cardboard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabraulter Posted April 28, 2005 Share Posted April 28, 2005 i knew it was an ogre. i might have hesitated a half a second, but i saw the club, the wrist bands and the excessive body fat and knew that it was an ogre better than most for their first pixel sig. work on your shading a bit, and ....i guess it could just be your style, and i cannot really talk much, but pull up some anatomy websites and put in muscles so that your figure doesnt look like twiggy the twig boy. take a look in the mirror. im assuming you have calves and thighs....biceps, etc etc etc. like the action scene. and unlike most other people, you actually make your characters big and fill the whole scene. most just put a tiny little one pixel person and a brown bg that is the 'wild' so good job. with some practice, there is much in your future young padawan. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColAvanor Posted April 28, 2005 Share Posted April 28, 2005 Don't your first time pixelers ever get it?? THAT is NOT shading. That has nothing to do with shading... Look outside...do you see a gradient starting from sun? No! Make it darker where the shadows are...not where it's furthest from the sun... That pool of lava for instance.. it looks like a red rock since you shaded dark the area where a shadow would be should it be a rock. (btw...lava + grass = no grass + FIRE) I suggest forgetting the light source for a second. Then shade in a way that makes things look 3D instead of flat cardboard. If you succeed then the next time you can do the 3d shading in accordance to the light source (which you by nature pretty much do the first time anyway..) oh and it is better than the average first...you have some hope with your line work...that's why I bothered to comment anyway :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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