June 12, 200818 yr Don't mind the text, played around a bit. Tried adding a "darker" C4D and lowered the opacity of the splatters (70%), Might completely redo it sometime. [hide=Old post]Take not that the text is just a joke, it's not going to be like that (I probably wont use the signature either). I'm not too happy with it, Colours got semi-nice in my opinion, I guess I'll learn as it's my first one as well. Tips (do I dare to say C/c?) on how I could do a better job next time would be highly appreciated.[/hide]
June 12, 200818 yr Yay i helped with this on msn :P Looks cool actually, little more detail in the bg next time but amazing for a first mate Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear
June 12, 200818 yr Ignoring the text.. Your splash marks aren't thick enough to cover your Typlosion's arse, and the background is a little plain.. Otherwise, it warrants a seven kittens out of ten.. Eight, considering this is your first try at a sprite. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
June 12, 200818 yr Author I could try that tomorrow, too "lazy/tired" to do it now, thanks for the comment Ronnie *smiles*. @Unoalexi, So you mean I should Cover his whole behind using C4Ds or something similar?
June 13, 200818 yr Quite nice for a first, but like said before the background could do with some detail in there. Also, I personally think the splatters are a bit distracting, but maybe that's just because they stand out so much against the plain background. I really like the flow you created with the C4D, though. pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 13, 200818 yr Author Thanks Jopie, I'll probably improve it a bit later tonight, going to fix a signature for Ryder atm.
June 13, 200818 yr Like Jopie said, the splatters are a bit distracting, and as Ronnie said, maybe add a darker C4D ;) GJ nevertheless. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
June 14, 200818 yr Typhlosion FTW!!. I quite like this although the whole "explosion" stuff coming from the sprites.... :roll: behind... sort of puts me off. The colours work well though. The new text is alright...but not GREAT as such. Keep working on it I say.
June 14, 200818 yr Author I was playing around with the text (Supposed to ignore it :P). Yeah I'll keep training. Thanks for the comment.
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