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It feels a bit "Zig-Zaggy" for a knife,I think a straight knife would look better. It feels a bit "Flat" if you know what I mean and what's the thing on the tip? I really like your text though, I think it's "cool". Pretty decent work overall ;) (Better then me).

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Again, agreed with Julius, it would look a lot better with a straight blade. The blood (assuming that's what it is) at the top looks quite unrealistic, it should drip down more instead of being a cloud-ish shape. Other than that, it isn't bad, but not really great IMO.

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Hmm i like the text you made but the sword isn't really realistic

 

 

 

Try to keep the blade straight and add some reflection lines to the blade.

 

 

 

Also use a weightlining trick, it makes it look more professional. All you do it make your image which the same thickness lines then outline the whole image with a thicker line, not too thick, but enough and it smartens your picture up

 

 

 

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As said before, the knife is too wonky. Unless you chucked it in a furnarce or had the Hulk nearby, its a wonder how it got like that.

 

 

 

I like it. ;)

 

 

 

'Nuff said really.

 

 

 

You could make the lines slightly cleaner though, and work on the hilt.

 

 

 

Shame the scanner is down.

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