June 19, 200818 yr My old account was LuckySlev... but since the forum asploded, I couldn't log in and my thread was nowhere to be found. Anyhow, here are some recent pictures that I took. Various styles My house Salt grains on my palm. The focus and the underexposure is intentional A friend Skies on a texas plain. eyes Long exposure shot. Colors corrected because of the strong yellow hue of the streetlight affecting the picture c&c?
June 19, 200818 yr These photos...there -ish. Not good, not bad, just meh. The eye one looks good though, your best there. The house one is just a normal shot, no sort of excitement there, and overexposure is a problem. The slat grains. Everything is blurry and just generally isn't the great. Your friend is pretty hot btw. OT...That is a good shot, the b&w effect really works. Good composure as well. The Texas one is quite good, very strong colours, which i like. Bold and simple. The eye one is very good, though you might want it too look slightly less edited looking. Although i think it has great compure and effect. :thumbsup: kudos for that. Again on the last one, maybe make it slightly less edited, or make it more, for a photo manip. Not halfway in between. I also hope you read down too here.
June 19, 200818 yr Were those swirly blue things in the last picture added later? If not what are they? :?
June 19, 200818 yr Hmm quite good photos the 4th 5th and 6th ones are the best. If the eye is meant to be a macro shot then why is it blurred? Maybe try to make it all focused :) The blue things from the expose are cool and the clouds are quite good Now experiment with composition :thumbsup: Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear
June 19, 200818 yr They're all a bit... simple. I'd call them snapshots rather than real photography to be honest. I'll wait for some of the great photographers to come in and give detailed C/C, but personally I'm not a big fan of any of them. Though, the last one looks kind of cool. pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 19, 200818 yr Author the eyes is only blurry because the camera was focused on the iris :|, and my hands were shaky. I was holding the camera that close. And I didn't edit it or anything, so I don't know how to make it look less edited, lol. EDIT: Crap, that's not my house... This is my house.
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