k on a scale from 1 to 10 10 being the best tell me what you think...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/L ... hdraft.bmp

its okkkk i guess but u need more shading and choose a better shading style and define the postion of the main light source better

shading is done ok. better than me since i can't do it... yet.

 

 

 

work more on the whole outlining scene so you can get a perspective of the light source, to help with shading.

Its kool but a lot of lines need some twitching, like the shoulders.. one is a bit straight at the top, a little bit too straight. Nice shading for the timespace

30 minutes? Seriously put some more effort into it.

Ya i did need to put more time into it... and Jervi if your ever going to read this... I could shade for you...

Ya i did need to put more time into it... and Jervi if your ever going to read this... I could shade for you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no thanks, i'll learn eventually. :D thanks for the offer though.

Jervi could you teach me to draw like you can lol ill teach you how to shade...

Jervi could you teach me to draw like you can lol ill teach you how to shade...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He said no. It would be a waste of his time anyway :P

no he said he didnt want me to do it for him not if i could teach him, besides i think i got the pixeling down.. check out my new sig...