They both wanted no changes.

 

 

The background is very good on the first one =D>, renders are a bit big though (Easier with one render) and doesn't blend very well, text needs to be improved. I suggest playing with colour and layer settings as I can see you played around a bit with the opacity, font could be smaller and less "swirly". About the blending part, smudging is your best friend combined with different layer settings.

 

 

 

Second one is very plain, I have to say it looks like text on a single C4D, try making it more interesting by adding many different C4Ds and erase the parts that look bad and brush in lightning on interesting places, the text is the same as above.

 

 

 

A big jump to be honest, good job pat :thumbup:!

Well the second one he wanted plain lol :

 

The text was also ordered, and the first one is 1 render :

 

 

 

Thanks :

 

 

 

I like :arrow: : Smily

It's one render!? *rephrases* It's a lot easier with one focal point and your welcome.

Lol :

The first one looks decent, but you definitely need to blend the render more. You should try to avoid placing text over a focal point too, like you did with the guy on the right.

yay Death note!

 

 

 

But yeah, I like the first one it's really good... second one not so much.

The text does not suit the signature at all. Otherwise very nice, although some blending work is needed :thumbsup: