Pat_61 Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 They both wanted no changes. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 The background is very good on the first one =D>, renders are a bit big though (Easier with one render) and doesn't blend very well, text needs to be improved. I suggest playing with colour and layer settings as I can see you played around a bit with the opacity, font could be smaller and less "swirly". About the blending part, smudging is your best friend combined with different layer settings. Second one is very plain, I have to say it looks like text on a single C4D, try making it more interesting by adding many different C4Ds and erase the parts that look bad and brush in lightning on interesting places, the text is the same as above. A big jump to be honest, good job pat :thumbup:! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted July 23, 2008 Author Share Posted July 23, 2008 Well the second one he wanted plain lol : The text was also ordered, and the first one is 1 render : Thanks : I like :arrow: : Smily I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 It's one render!? *rephrases* It's a lot easier with one focal point and your welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted July 23, 2008 Author Share Posted July 23, 2008 Lol : I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 The first one looks decent, but you definitely need to blend the render more. You should try to avoid placing text over a focal point too, like you did with the guy on the right. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 yay Death note! But yeah, I like the first one it's really good... second one not so much. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pienaple Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 The text does not suit the signature at all. Otherwise very nice, although some blending work is needed :thumbsup: I may start making sigs againRSN: Pie Naple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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