Here is it. It's for my friend, who got 85 slayer today. U don't maybe get the point now, because that isn't ready yet ;).

 

 

 

I think it's pretty good for 1st try, but i don't know what to do for the gras and water :F.

 

 

 

Can u give me some tips please?

Well, the transition between the grass and the water is way to abrupt I think.

 

 

 

There's someting wrong with the black outlining on the fountain too, but not sure what :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but then again, I'm a pixel noob so...

In the fountain, the place spurting water is too far to the left.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe show some curvature from the land to the water.

 

 

 

Like on a beach, sand maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try to add grass poking up elsewhere rather than where it meets

 

 

 

the water, as well at the building.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe add a few flowers in the grass?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Besides that, it looks fairly well done to me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job for a first.

very nice for a first, specially the shading and everything, only suggestions are, the land to water transition is lil to abrupt, i suggest instead of using a blk outline, use a darker shade of the objects color, and the fountain top is off centered

it look ok, but the perspective is off, try to change the path so that it looks like it's from the same angle as the house, right now it looks to be from straight above, but i looks cool, also maybe think about changing the bright green colour on the grass to a more natural one, it kinda screams atm. and what everyone else said about the water-grasss exchange :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also, the fountain needs texture and depth, right now it's like a plastic tuve sticking from the ground, make the walls thicker.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but it definitely has potential, excellent start.

The grass is the least of your problems..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm not going to just re-type what everyone else said, you should really look into the perspective and get that straightened out.

hey thats pretty sweet, nice job i dont think the grass needs improvement, keep up the good work!!!

the abby whip is like... flat... :?

the right side of the fountain needs to be lowered

thats really good for a first

 

 

 

i agree with everybody else but,

 

 

 

one thing...the abbysal whip looks more like a miniture abbysal demon...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but again,brilliant job for your first!