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Second sprite *Slightly updated, need feedback*


VjuliusT

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Added two effect C4Ds and because I suck at C4Ds I need feedback to see if I'm in the correct direction.

 

[hide=old post]I really like this one, it's simple yet good looking. I plan to add a couple of effect C4Ds though.

 

 

 

I was thinking of using this one for the sprite collab but it might be too dark for Thrus liking.

 

 

 

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Thanks for the comments.

 

 

 

@Stilev, Thanks for being honest there :thumbup:, I'll see what I can do.

 

@Jopie, Thanks, I'll try to experiment with a couple of C4Ds.

 

 

 

I need feedback on my smudging as well :ohnoes:, hit me how hard you want.

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The effect c4ds are too small, theres some nice ones by lilmil, magic, and Rippie92 in tip.it resources. It also looks like you've smudged it to much. Looks more WIP than anything. By the way use a small hard brush at 80 opacity, it owns. If you're using chalk brush it makes it LQ. ;) You could get some normal c4ds, with the transparent bg's. to place behind and infront of your sprite to give it depth and fill the unused space. I'ts very close to negative space :P

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^ That nub is right.

 

 

 

It's a good start, but it does need more non-distorted C4Diness. Try to get some more light-dark contrast and colours in there too, but I fail at explaining that.

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Chalk brush yeah :(, on Uber settings though. When smuging with round and hard brushes should I use a low or high strength? I can't find the "spot" there. I'll try to fix that problem with the negative space, good practice for my usless C4D placement skills. Thanks Thru.

 

 

 

@Shiny thanks for the comment :), I'll keep that in mind.

 

 

 

@Jopie, I'll surely keep that in mind.

 

 

 

@Promise, Huh? I've been away from the RuneScape community for a while so I don't get it.

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