Hawks Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 Made without any tutorials... But now I think the text is really quite bad... C/C please. :) sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baalboy5 Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 Well the outline on the star stands out to much, the brushes go over kirby. But I like the lighting and the mix of colors, it's cheerful and makes me happy when I see it. looks nice, just minior errors and maybe too much going on :? Don't you know the first rule of MMO's? Anyone higher level than you has no life, and anyone lower than you is a noob. People in OT eat glass when they are bored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 You're getting better. :thumbup: I quite like it, but the black-ish line around Kirby needs to go. Also, I'd get rid of the wind effect, the background under it looks pretty good so that effect just isn't needed. Try blending the render more too. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 I agree with Jopie. I also think it's too many colours :|, good improvement though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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