September 13, 200817 yr V1: Here it is. A few things: 1. I know the area to the right is lacking something... I just can't think of what. 2. The text is too simple, I know that too. But I can't think of a font to use there. 3. What do you think of this kinda random, Tangoish ( :P ) style? 4. The very left area, I'm gonna add something there, but I have that taken care of. 5. I love lists. V2:
September 13, 200817 yr I wouldn't put text in until you've finished the piece. I would take the brown C4D (?) away, it's really distracting - I would replace it with some bright smudging like you have at the end of the streams. As for the right side, maybe an effect C4D? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
September 13, 200817 yr The brown C4D (?) is mind blowingly ugly. Other than that, not bad. Just add a bit more to the right side and sort the type out and you've got yourself a pretty decent sig. (btw I'm Ruuku from your IRC channel :P) Steam | Soup | Last.fm
September 13, 200817 yr You sir, are not a bad smudger. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
September 14, 200817 yr It doesn't work for me as it is right now, but it has potential. Too many different styles of stuff in there IMO, I'd definitely get rid of the brown thing and the pixeled flame/explosion near the sprite (or is that part of it?). The Soa-style smudging is pretty good, and if you add some more of that you'd have a pretty good signature. pixel avvy by me deviantART
September 18, 200817 yr Author Crap I'm slow, I've been really, really busy this week (Three tests to prepare for) so I haven't had time to finish it completely. I have my last test today, so hopefully I can have at least another WIP done by this afternoon.
September 18, 200817 yr Author So, another WIP is up. Still finding something to put in there, and removed the c4d due to popular demand. :P
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