Cacmypants Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 It's my turn! (hasn't done one yet) so is that dragon or what? (ignore the legs and boots, because we all know what they look like, I only added them to get a rough idea of how it would look with my plate concept) anyways.. I doubt it will look anything like that... Please dont comment on wrong proportions etc, etc, I know it's not perfect, nowhere near perfect. Resist the urge to get all "high and mighty" on me, because I can do better than this, much better :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Looks good to me, though I would practice shading, not very good IMO - try using more subtle colours. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 14, 2008 Author Share Posted November 14, 2008 Lol, trust me, I can do better than that if i want to. I was literally just swishing my mouse around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 Why post something you didn't put much effort into? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 15, 2008 Author Share Posted November 15, 2008 Because I'm lazy XD well, ok, I'll show some of my better stuff later. sometimes I just like to make spontaneous works without thinking too much. Like I said in the title, It's more of a concept than an actual piece of art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted November 15, 2008 Share Posted November 15, 2008 Well, if that's a concept, post a new version with improvements that we've suggested. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 16, 2008 Author Share Posted November 16, 2008 good idea, lol. but i got a jack-load of assessments coming up, so probably not soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shivers21 Posted November 16, 2008 Share Posted November 16, 2008 looks good, cool idea, but the white really ruins the image, try shading with a lighter red, not a hard white. {DeviantART}{Last.Fm}{Join Sublime GFX, great community for artists!}Back to RuneScape, Again.Avatar by Brian The Great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 17, 2008 Author Share Posted November 17, 2008 looks good, cool idea, but the white really ruins the image, try shading with a lighter red, not a hard white. Lol, just imagine there is a spotlight shining on it or something. Because, literally, all I did was click on the "lighten/darken tool and swish a few areas with white to make it less flat. I is very lazy :P Plus, you wouldn't call it shading when you are trying to make areas brighter, hehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
basiliko Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Good look, but awkward posture (was the platemail trying to bend its back?) The Haraguroi Club: Where Yandere Thrive for Chopping Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 19, 2008 Author Share Posted November 19, 2008 Good look, but awkward posture (was the platemail trying to bend its back?) Ok, to be honest, I never intended to add the legs (it was like a... "well, why not" sort of thing) and the posture I made is more or less an intentional joke, it looks like it's bending it's back because the legs are straight :P . (has anyone noticed that I made the front of the platebody look like a dragon head? lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 I spy a few issues in your perspective(the foot) and your proportions. The thighs are too short as well. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 I spy a few issues in your perspective(the foot) and your proportions. The thighs are too short as well. Like I said, I fully recognise it's [bleep]ed up proportions, it literally took me a few seconds to sketch up the legs and boots, not much effort there lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 his shoulders displaced it should be further forward Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Like I said, I fully recognise it's [bleep] up proportions, it literally took me a few seconds to sketch up the legs and boots, not much effort there lol. There was no point in doing this piece then if you don't put effort in. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echocut Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Good look, but awkward posture (was the platemail trying to bend its back?) Ok, to be honest, I never intended to add the legs (it was like a... "well, why not" sort of thing) and the posture I made is more or less an intentional joke, it looks like it's bending it's back because the legs are straight :P . (has anyone noticed that I made the front of the platebody look like a dragon head? lol) I actually was going to say that, but you did... :) But still, why didn't you go through and do a nice one rather than just 'swishing my mouse around'. I know you have your life to live, I'm just saying that it would be much nicer and easier to examine if you did take the time. It would mean more days to work on, but it would turn out better in the long run. (I'm not flaming or being 'high and mighty', but its what I learned from my art professors) ;) 67/99/120 Invention Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cacmypants Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 Good look, but awkward posture (was the platemail trying to bend its back?) Ok, to be honest, I never intended to add the legs (it was like a... "well, why not" sort of thing) and the posture I made is more or less an intentional joke, it looks like it's bending it's back because the legs are straight :P . (has anyone noticed that I made the front of the platebody look like a dragon head? lol) I actually was going to say that, but you did... :) But still, why didn't you go through and do a nice one rather than just 'swishing my mouse around'. I know you have your life to live, I'm just saying that it would be much nicer and easier to examine if you did take the time. It would mean more days to work on, but it would turn out better in the long run. (I'm not flaming or being 'high and mighty', but its what I learned from my art professors) ;) See, I respect that. ======================= (To everyone else) I'll have a better piece up soon, I've actually drafted a few. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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