New Large piece.

[Shiny]

A new large piece, some typography in it and on a little thing a bit like me DA ID.

 

 

 

 

This thing is for a challenge. 100 pieces of artwork, all to a certain theme. Number 1 is an introduction.

 

 

 

 

And some nooby sig for someone else.

 

 

 

 

Thanks for looking! Some c/c would be choice!

[Nadril]

Don't mix type that are close in styles. Only mix type that is vastly different (Sans Serif and script) or very similar (like two Sans Serif's).

[pryomancer]

Overall, I don't really like it.

 

 

 

The font you used for 'the revelation' needs to go, it's bad.

 

 

 

Stick with only 1 font, maybe a 2nd if it needs it.

 

 

 

Your text placement is random and doesn't flow. Rearrange it to make it look better.

 

 

 

Your c4d also looks flat and out of place against the woman.

[Jopie211]

^ I'd have to agree. The LPs typography just seems too random, actually I'm not sure about having text on it at all.

 

 

 

The other two pieces are decent, but there just isn't a lot to them IMO.

[venomai]

The typography absolutely kills it.

 

 

 

- Never use any of those fonts ever again.

 

- Use fewer fonts and keep capitalization consistent between headers.

 

- Don't put random words together for the sake of having some text.

 

- Don't fade certain lines of text unless you've got a good reason.

 

- Don't stick text in each corner unless you've got a very good reason.

[Sam]

shiny, how do you get a DA ID? I don't know where to upload it.

[Ouchy]

I"ll help you, LB.

 

 

 

When uploading it, choose the category as: deviantART related, then under deviantID.

 

Once you have uploaded it, go to "Edit Settings and Profile", then to "Userpage Display". Above of "Feature Deviant", and below "Desktop Screensht", there should be deviantID. Click on it, select your already uploaded ID, and press okay. :)