Pat_61 Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 V2: V1: How does it look? C/C I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipkjooo Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 The C4D thing is too bright, catches your eye more than the render does, maybe dim those down... Or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 D: I really can't say I like it. At first glance, it's just really unclear what the render actually is, mainly because it's so big and takes up so much of the canvas. The tech-ish overlay lines are really bad and just distracting/not needed IMO. The fractals seem out of place and random too, they just don't help the flow/background. I think the colouring is pretty bad too, everything just doesn't look natural at all. I do think the main thing you need to work on is render placement (including how to scale it appropriately) though, since IMO that's where it went wrong. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 Jopie summed it all up, really. My only advice would be to work with a bigger canvas. That way, you aren't cramping it all in, and have more freedom. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 The render was never resized :lol: . Yeah... ill try diming down the fractal. EDIT: I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star. Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 Is that render a moss covered wall? ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 Is that render a moss covered wall? :lol: It's from Ghost Recon. Here it is: http://planetrenders.net/renders/displa ... pos=-16301 And Pat, what program do you use? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted November 23, 2008 Author Share Posted November 23, 2008 Gimp=FTW *sarcasm*And yes it is a moss wall*/sarcasm* Who makes a render of a moss wall :lol: I might make a bigger piece later today... any ideas? I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 Looking at it better, it looks like it was slapped together, without any blending, or the like. Look on dA for tutorials, and inspiration. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted November 23, 2008 Author Share Posted November 23, 2008 ok, i might try to make it w/o the fractal I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 I would keep the fractal, it adds a bit of flow. Perhaps do some black brushing over the top and then create a clipping mask to the fractal. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted November 23, 2008 Author Share Posted November 23, 2008 What do you mean by clipping mask on the fractal? I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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