maxiemumu Posted July 14, 2005 Share Posted July 14, 2005 Yes, tis me. The infamous Runescape nudist... (XD) anyways, yeah. This is my WIP and i need some C/C. The chunk black lines will be gone when I begin to color, so... yeah. Update: I began coloring the character, and the dent in his head WAS supposed to be my infamous long hair, then I decided to redo my character. I will be putting my red party hat atop the head denty-part XD Update 2: This is quite a bit improved from the last. Btw I SAMPLE BECAUSE ART IS STOLEN. Fool. I appreciate my own work, so I sample it, and prevent noobs looking for fast cash copying my art. Sorry if I seem a little irate, but you giving me a bad rating because of a word is pathetic, and ignorant. Update 3: So, yes I have begun the wildy back ground mountain. I widened the chest, re shaded, fixed his lips, and re did the fore-arms. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted July 14, 2005 Share Posted July 14, 2005 I think the reason no one (i wouldn't post if it is not zero) want to say anything is...it is very incomplete. so try to finish it first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted July 14, 2005 Author Share Posted July 14, 2005 Cupcake, WIP is Work in Progress. This is the basic (very basic) lineart to the piece. I like to get criticism on the basics first just so I know what to change to make it as good as possible. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted July 14, 2005 Share Posted July 14, 2005 the head has a dent in it, and maybe make the shoulder pads bigger? i like how you drew it though, looks more human than others :) (extra points for quoting me! :D ) axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted July 14, 2005 Author Share Posted July 14, 2005 Bum't ed...ish.... FO SHIZLE! OMGL0zL!LlL BBQ BUMP! -cough- Sorry guys I had a sudden outburst of Tourretes ^_^ Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted July 14, 2005 Share Posted July 14, 2005 Whats with his arms? One is way bigger then another, his chest is to small, and the shading you've done just well make it looked beveled. Restart; that's what I'd do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted July 15, 2005 Author Share Posted July 15, 2005 Whats with his arms? One is way bigger then another, his chest is to small, and the shading you've done just well make it looked beveled. Restart; that's what I'd do. You make me feel warm inside -.- I won't restart. i never restart, i adjust. I'm fixing the arm. And I don't quite see how beveled applies to my shading technique. No angular forms are invovled in the picture really... the shading is just a new idea really. I kind of adapted from cell to smoother, to this. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Ok disregard my C/C. No problem, I love wasting my time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Ok disregard my C/C. No problem, I love wasting my time. *flips pages* uh huh... in the Jake's dictionary this qualifys as spam... you know what would really hurt more than being snotty teen, making them sorry for disregarding your c/c. example: im sorry, all i wanted to do was help. im really really sorry if what i said was hurtful. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KnightLite Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 i give it a 0/1000 until you post it without that damn 'sample' over half ur work, i hate it when people do that, like we're gonna steal that... - Only character in Runescape History maxed out in RSC and RS2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted July 15, 2005 Author Share Posted July 15, 2005 Updated and Bum'd Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Ok disregard my C/C. No problem, I love wasting my time. *flips pages* uh huh... in the Jake's dictionary this qualifys as spam... you know what would really hurt more than being snotty teen, making them sorry for disregarding your c/c. example: im sorry, all i wanted to do was help. im really really sorry if what i said was hurtful. No it's no qualified as spam as, due to the fact it pretains to the piece and my C/C. And who are you to tell me not to spam? You're some how a spam wizard and you cast a spammy spam blaster everywhere you go with your futile comments. So indeed your comment can be qualified as spam my friend. OT: I still don't like the shading. Just doesn't seem to fit. ANd even still the guys chest is to small, his forearms are tiny behind his back. Amulet is severely deformed. His teeth are to bold, try a gray around them so they don't look like "Hey my teeth have gengivitus and they're about to fall out." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Ok disregard my C/C. No problem, I love wasting my time. *flips pages* uh huh... in the Jake's dictionary this qualifys as spam... you know what would really hurt more than being snotty teen, making them sorry for disregarding your c/c. example: im sorry, all i wanted to do was help. im really really sorry if what i said was hurtful. No it's no qualified as spam as, due to the fact it pretains to the piece and my C/C. And who are you to tell me not to spam? You're some how a spam wizard and you cast a spammy spam blaster everywhere you go with your futile comments. So indeed your comment can be qualified as spam my friend. only a spammer says it 6 times in a paragraph, im your friend? it seemed like you hated me :? max fix that guys chests... they look like *censored due to family forum-ness-ness* axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted July 16, 2005 Author Share Posted July 16, 2005 no more tig bitties, and now the mouth is better, and the chest is wider. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted July 16, 2005 Share Posted July 16, 2005 Hey mah homie. ;P. You should like. Start to add awesome hair. I suggest something like Duff McKagan's.. His hair is awesome. Or, you can go with what I sent you. ;P This sig's a LARGE improvement from Mr. Max the nudist, walking through Varrock. It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted July 16, 2005 Author Share Posted July 16, 2005 large, as in his cleavage? XD lol, thanks alex Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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