rate and crit please.

7/10 right now, I like the shading on the right guy. For the one on the left, I think the shadow on his face is a little off.. the actual cloak doesn't even go past his hair, so wouldn't leave that large a shadow on his face. I Understand you want him to have a mystical sense to him, but the shadow, too much. Will there be a bg? The horns on the shoulder pads of the d chain blend with the white, so maybe shade them a wee bit grey? Overall, good so far.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit: also, It looks like the ranger hasn't just shot and arrow. I shoot archery irl, and after a shot, you still hold your bow out as an arrow flies. At the rate an arrows flies, the rangers hand would still be up if the arrows was only that far. (confusing, eh?) just put his hand up a little, as if he was going to shoot again.

7/10 right now, I like the shading on the right guy. For the one on the left, I think the shadow on his face is a little off.. the actual cloak doesn't even go past his hair, so wouldn't leave that large a shadow on his face. I Understand you want him to have a mystical sense to him, but the shadow, too much. Will there be a bg? The horns on the shoulder pads of the d chain blend with the white, so maybe shade them a wee bit grey? Overall, good so far.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit: also, It looks like the ranger hasn't just shot and arrow. I shoot archery irl, and after a shot, you still hold your bow out as an arrow flies. At the rate an arrows flies, the rangers hand would still be up if the arrows was only that far. (confusing, eh?) just put his hand up a little, as if he was going to shoot again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the archery thing was a simple mess up, but im not going to redo that part of the sig. (no need to go all pro on me :lol:) yes there will obviously be a bg. the horns on the shoulder pads blend with the white, could this be because there is no bg yet and i have not shaded them?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just needed to state that before you crit the wrong things. the shadow on his face was requested so i cannot fix that.

Cool idea... But where the shading/shadow from his hood covers his face, it's to pink(this first line of shading) it should be a skin colour. But yeah, awesome. (Y) <-- Thumbs up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ape8191.

I like the concept but if I were to change anything about it i'd have the character on the left further in the distance, maybe redraw him because it looks too cluttered with two characters at the front. You need to make the characters look apart of the background because looking at some of your other work it looks like youve drawn a character then quickly decided on a background later, it may help improve your sigs though the characters look pretty good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The right guy looks sunburnt, is that cus hes shocked or somethin? maybe you need to decide upon a friendlier skin colour for your characters.. Keep up the good work though, I seriously like your cartoony characters.

I like the concept but if I were to change anything about it i'd have the character on the left further in the distance, maybe redraw him because it looks too cluttered with two characters at the front. You need to make the characters look apart of the background because looking at some of your other work it looks like youve drawn a character then quickly decided on a background later, it may help improve your sigs though the characters look pretty good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The right guy looks sunburnt, is that cus hes shocked or somethin? maybe you need to decide upon a friendlier skin colour for your characters.. Keep up the good work though, I seriously like your cartoony characters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the skin color for the right guy was requested "darker than white" thank you for the cc guys. ill try the bg thing in my next one :P