first one since I came back from my summer break holiday.

 

 

 

Crit on the smudging?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heres a .psd for those that want it: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TOTPKBWU

 

 

 

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Tags at 2 in the morning?

 

 

 

I think it would be better if you cropped it, maybe like this, or at least roughly like it:

 

 

 

 

 

 

I love the color though. Any significance in the 3 lines (looks like a hidden W at first glance) and the circle?

 

I love the color though. Any significance in the 3 lines (looks like a hidden W at first glance) and the circle?

 

 

 

Nope. Something for a focal, instead of the usual render/stock. I get bored of those so I chucked in a circle and lines.

I'm really loving the texture you got there :thumbup: looks like splattered watercolor. I see what Nad meant with the W, if you made it into one it could improve the focal.

Colours are great just like Nadril mentioned but I'm not really fan of the texture, did you use a setting in Gimp for it?

Yeah I'd also crop it. Looks pretty good, but that filter = noplz. Also, not too sure about the lines, I'd just remove them and keep the circle as a focal point (and maybe expand it a little by adding some more smaller circles to/near it).

 

 

 

Anyway, nice work.

Hows this?

 

 

 

Hmm... to be honest I kind of liked the mix of an industrial looking piece (what with the straight geometry in it) versus a more blended version. The newer one doesn't have as defined of a focal point and it gets boring. The white space is also a lot more noticeable in the new version.

Keep the W'ish thing looked a lot better, the texture looks a lot better now when you smudged it a bit more :thumbup:. Mind sharing the .psd?

Tags at 2 in the morning is early. I've done in like 4 in the morning. I get most inspiration on nights. ;)