Shiny Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 first one since I came back from my summer break holiday. Crit on the smudging? Heres a .psd for those that want it: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TOTPKBWU ------------ Tags at 2 in the morning? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 I think it would be better if you cropped it, maybe like this, or at least roughly like it: I love the color though. Any significance in the 3 lines (looks like a hidden W at first glance) and the circle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 23, 2009 Author Share Posted January 23, 2009 I love the color though. Any significance in the 3 lines (looks like a hidden W at first glance) and the circle? Nope. Something for a focal, instead of the usual render/stock. I get bored of those so I chucked in a circle and lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 I'm really loving the texture you got there :thumbup: looks like splattered watercolor. I see what Nad meant with the W, if you made it into one it could improve the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Colours are great just like Nadril mentioned but I'm not really fan of the texture, did you use a setting in Gimp for it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Yeah I'd also crop it. Looks pretty good, but that filter = noplz. Also, not too sure about the lines, I'd just remove them and keep the circle as a focal point (and maybe expand it a little by adding some more smaller circles to/near it). Anyway, nice work. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 23, 2009 Author Share Posted January 23, 2009 Hows this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Hmm... to be honest I kind of liked the mix of an industrial looking piece (what with the straight geometry in it) versus a more blended version. The newer one doesn't have as defined of a focal point and it gets boring. The white space is also a lot more noticeable in the new version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Keep the W'ish thing looked a lot better, the texture looks a lot better now when you smudged it a bit more :thumbup:. Mind sharing the .psd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estonian dude Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Tags at 2 in the morning is early. I've done in like 4 in the morning. I get most inspiration on nights. ;) So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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