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CC?

:shock: Wow!

 

 

 

Great job on the water, though you have added reflections on the water where the shadow of the boat should be :roll:

Wow that looks amazing!

 

 

 

Needs some Antia aliasing on some of the sails, it seems very rough.

As said before that does look amazing. The detail of the water and the sky looks very well done. And the colours are very nice as well. Though I'll agree with LB and Laxaria that you should smooth out the sails and add the boats reflection in the water. Other than that it looks fantastic.

 

 

 

Nice job :thumbsup:

I think the water could use some more reflections, but other than that and the roughness of the edges of the sails it looks really good. Great job on the sky. :thumbup:

i agree make the water lighter it seems too, all one colory atm

 

 

 

looks amazing tho =P~

Anti aliased the sails. Going to work on the water next. Should I tone down the aa a little bit?

 

 

 

Tweaked the water so it looks more like water and less like oil.

 

 

 

:shock: Wow!

 

 

 

Great job on the water, though you have added reflections on the water where the shadow of the boat should be :roll:

 

 

 

*smacks with newspaper*

 

 

 

Not at that angle!!

 

 

 

You shouldn't have made the water brighter... >.<

My god that is amazing! :shock: Good job!

Nice colours, and okay shading. It is pretty simple though, and canvas (as for avatars always) is quite small, so it's not really anything very impressive. Good job though. I like it how you work on small canvas, and finish your works. Instead of trying to fill something like signature size..

 

 

 

Good job overall! =D>

 

 

 

PS: It's cool you still use the signature I made for you ;)

I prefer V2 actually, the colour of the water on the new version just seems a bit too bright and sutarated for a sunset scene. It needs some brighter highlights IMO, but not necessarily a whole brighter colour scheme on the water.

 

 

 

First: Image the current water that is quite blue.

 

Second image: I changed the color scheme of the water from a less grey to a little more blue. This is essentially the color of the water in V2 but just with a little more blue.

 

Third image V2 just for comparison.

V2 is still the best, I think. The other two have too many contrasting colors and are a bit too saturated.

 

 

 

:thumbup:

What jopie said!

 

 

 

Fine detailing needs some more work though. The left most sail's lower edge is ver pixellated and same with the right side on the middle sail.

 

 

 

The blending on the sails from the light could be a bit better, since its not a very good reflective surface.

 

 

 

Now excuse me while I stop myself from nitpicking at minute details. :wall: