Moonshadow Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 [hide=V1][/hide] [hide=V2][/hide] [hide=V3][/hide] Current Version: CC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 :shock: Wow! Great job on the water, though you have added reflections on the water where the shadow of the boat should be :roll: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Wow that looks amazing! Needs some Antia aliasing on some of the sails, it seems very rough. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason321 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 As said before that does look amazing. The detail of the water and the sky looks very well done. And the colours are very nice as well. Though I'll agree with LB and Laxaria that you should smooth out the sails and add the boats reflection in the water. Other than that it looks fantastic. Nice job :thumbsup: Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 I think the water could use some more reflections, but other than that and the roughness of the edges of the sails it looks really good. Great job on the sky. :thumbup: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nash Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 i agree make the water lighter it seems too, all one colory atm looks amazing tho =P~ Pixel Signature Made By Me.Pixel Art Tutorial * Pixel Gallery * My Free Pixel Sigs Shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonshadow Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 Anti aliased the sails. Going to work on the water next. Should I tone down the aa a little bit? Tweaked the water so it looks more like water and less like oil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 :shock: Wow! Great job on the water, though you have added reflections on the water where the shadow of the boat should be :roll: *smacks with newspaper* Not at that angle!! You shouldn't have made the water brighter... >.< Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 My god that is amazing! :shock: Good job! My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syd Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 Nice colours, and okay shading. It is pretty simple though, and canvas (as for avatars always) is quite small, so it's not really anything very impressive. Good job though. I like it how you work on small canvas, and finish your works. Instead of trying to fill something like signature size.. Good job overall! =D> PS: It's cool you still use the signature I made for you ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 I prefer V2 actually, the colour of the water on the new version just seems a bit too bright and sutarated for a sunset scene. It needs some brighter highlights IMO, but not necessarily a whole brighter colour scheme on the water. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonshadow Posted January 27, 2009 Author Share Posted January 27, 2009 First: Image the current water that is quite blue. Second image: I changed the color scheme of the water from a less grey to a little more blue. This is essentially the color of the water in V2 but just with a little more blue. Third image V2 just for comparison. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nom Posted January 27, 2009 Share Posted January 27, 2009 V2 is still the best, I think. The other two have too many contrasting colors and are a bit too saturated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 27, 2009 Share Posted January 27, 2009 :thumbup: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 What jopie said! Fine detailing needs some more work though. The left most sail's lower edge is ver pixellated and same with the right side on the middle sail. The blending on the sails from the light could be a bit better, since its not a very good reflective surface. Now excuse me while I stop myself from nitpicking at minute details. :wall: deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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