Ouchy Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Made a new stock tag, need on help on where to take it: Whatd'ya think? Where can it be improved. And I finally learnt clipping masks on Paint.Net ;) (Shock, I still use it) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Alright, btut you need to work on colors, flow and depth. And some moar clipping masks. So far so good. RAWR! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 31, 2009 Author Share Posted January 31, 2009 Will do ;) Ahh! You're too scary! Put that paper bag back over your head!! :lol: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Just a few things so far: The main problem IMO is the size of the stock. I think you should have resized it more before adding it to the canvas, right now the focal takes up nearly all the space, which will make it hard to add any effects at all. The text; the font isn't bad, but I'm not sure about the placement. I'd make it white and move it to the bottom right corner. The clipping masks: the one on the right is ok, but the one on the left looks pretty strange and is quite distracting because of its lowered opacity (I'm guessing that's what it is, anyway). pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Just a few things so far: The main problem IMO is the size of the stock. I think you should have resized it more before adding it to the canvas, right now the focal takes up nearly all the space, which will make it hard to add any effects at all. The text; the font isn't bad, but I'm not sure about the placement. I'd make it white and move it to the bottom right corner. The clipping masks: the one on the right is ok, but the one on the left looks pretty strange and is quite distracting because of its lowered opacity (I'm guessing that's what it is, anyway). In addition, due to the size of the stock, the face seems "floating" and very very creepy. Overall it seems very bland and not very interesting. The text needs to move as it is getting in the way of the focal. The clipping masks seem a bit weird. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 i really like it, though the clipping mask on the right i think takes to much attention from the stock 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted February 1, 2009 Author Share Posted February 1, 2009 All right, thanks for that advice guys. I'll add more clipping masks :P My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted February 1, 2009 Share Posted February 1, 2009 Im not sure but maybe if you made the text look like part of the mask. :? 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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