Tell me what ya think :

 

 

 

I see a couple spots I need to edit, but tell me how it is going so far.

Looks neat but nothing flows, colors dont go well together, render doesnt suit the bg, and seems out of place. the effects also seem out of place

Looks neat but nothing flows, colors dont go well together, render doesnt suit the bg, and seems out of place. the effects also seem out of place

 

 

 

Ok I'll keep on working on it :, yet the whole goal on this signature was to be a bit random and abstract.

I don't like how I can't really see the render very well. I don't even know what it is. On top of that it's tiny compared to the background and my eyes are drawn to the swirls just as easily as the render. I would try making the render larger and maybe moving it more towards the middle.

I don't like how I can't really see the render very well. I don't even know what it is. On top of that it's tiny compared to the background and my eyes are drawn to the swirls just as easily as the render. I would try making the render larger and maybe moving it more towards the middle.

 

 

 

It is sora from KH. I'll see what I can do :

with the size of the render, i would go with a sig about the size of this

 

 

 

Fine I guess that is as good as it gets for now.

Colours need major work, you need a light source and some flow, before it even looks half decent.

I like. Maybe add some lime green/turquoise on the right?

tough crowd :o. I thought I was doing pretty good on this one yet it seems I have a lot to work on.

Bleh, the liquified fractal on the right looks horrid. Seriously, take it off and you tag will look so much better.

yawn almost done...

You should never use other effects than changing colour on sprites, looking at it now it's you pretty much ruined the sprites themself which gives the background much more attention. By the way remove your BS attitude if you want people to help you at all.

You've utterly ruined it by trying to make a dual focal tag.

Looks neat but nothing flows, colors dont go well together, render doesnt suit the bg, and seems out of place. the effects also seem out of place

 

 

 

Ok I'll keep on working on it :, yet the whole goal on this signature was to be a bit random and abstract.

 

 

 

*smacks with newspaper* Abstract does not equal random! Great abstract siggy have things like color, flow, good lighting... Randomness in general is just bad.

What?

 

Am I the only one that thinks it looks pretty good?

 

 

 

The colors arent supposed to mix because they clash. And there's nothing wrong with this combination, color-wise.

 

 

 

Like someone said before, the liquified sprites could use some erasing. There's also some pink at the left, which should be blue.

 

Maybe you could create some 'air pressure' in the exact middle, Im not sure how you should do that though.

What?

 

Am I the only one that thinks it looks pretty good?

 

 

 

The colors arent supposed to mix because they clash. And there's nothing wrong with this combination, color-wise.

 

 

 

Like someone said before, the liquified sprites could use some erasing. There's also some pink at the left, which should be blue.

 

Maybe you could create some 'air pressure' in the exact middle, Im not sure how you should do that though.

 

 

 

Thanks now I can at least say it was not a total failure :thumbsup: .