selling1ko Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 Tell me what ya think : I see a couple spots I need to edit, but tell me how it is going so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 Looks neat but nothing flows, colors dont go well together, render doesnt suit the bg, and seems out of place. the effects also seem out of place 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selling1ko Posted February 3, 2009 Author Share Posted February 3, 2009 Looks neat but nothing flows, colors dont go well together, render doesnt suit the bg, and seems out of place. the effects also seem out of place Ok I'll keep on working on it :, yet the whole goal on this signature was to be a bit random and abstract. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rangeor Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 I don't like how I can't really see the render very well. I don't even know what it is. On top of that it's tiny compared to the background and my eyes are drawn to the swirls just as easily as the render. I would try making the render larger and maybe moving it more towards the middle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selling1ko Posted February 3, 2009 Author Share Posted February 3, 2009 I don't like how I can't really see the render very well. I don't even know what it is. On top of that it's tiny compared to the background and my eyes are drawn to the swirls just as easily as the render. I would try making the render larger and maybe moving it more towards the middle. It is sora from KH. I'll see what I can do : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 with the size of the render, i would go with a sig about the size of this 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selling1ko Posted February 3, 2009 Author Share Posted February 3, 2009 Fine I guess that is as good as it gets for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 Colours need major work, you need a light source and some flow, before it even looks half decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_Latios Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 I like. Maybe add some lime green/turquoise on the right? IRC Nick: Hiroki | 99 Agility | Max Quest Points | 138 CombatBandos drops: 20 Hilt | 22 Chestplate | 21 Tassets | 14 Boots Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selling1ko Posted February 3, 2009 Author Share Posted February 3, 2009 tough crowd :o. I thought I was doing pretty good on this one yet it seems I have a lot to work on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 Bleh, the liquified fractal on the right looks horrid. Seriously, take it off and you tag will look so much better. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selling1ko Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 yawn almost done... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 You should never use other effects than changing colour on sprites, looking at it now it's you pretty much ruined the sprites themself which gives the background much more attention. By the way remove your BS attitude if you want people to help you at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 You've utterly ruined it by trying to make a dual focal tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Looks neat but nothing flows, colors dont go well together, render doesnt suit the bg, and seems out of place. the effects also seem out of place Ok I'll keep on working on it :, yet the whole goal on this signature was to be a bit random and abstract. *smacks with newspaper* Abstract does not equal random! Great abstract siggy have things like color, flow, good lighting... Randomness in general is just bad. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 What? Am I the only one that thinks it looks pretty good? The colors arent supposed to mix because they clash. And there's nothing wrong with this combination, color-wise. Like someone said before, the liquified sprites could use some erasing. There's also some pink at the left, which should be blue. Maybe you could create some 'air pressure' in the exact middle, Im not sure how you should do that though. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selling1ko Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 What? Am I the only one that thinks it looks pretty good? The colors arent supposed to mix because they clash. And there's nothing wrong with this combination, color-wise. Like someone said before, the liquified sprites could use some erasing. There's also some pink at the left, which should be blue. Maybe you could create some 'air pressure' in the exact middle, Im not sure how you should do that though. Thanks now I can at least say it was not a total failure :thumbsup: . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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