vulcant Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 The Biology Man Blog: http://biologyman.blogspot.com/ I generally like biology too so Biology Man is fun and easy to make. The story will probably progress as the chapters we study do so that's why I'm trying to make a daily comic page. The rest you'll have to see as I make them! Now for an index: __-INDEX-__ 1.http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Biology-Man-1-113945521 2.http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Biology-Man-2-114012918 3.http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Biology-Man-3-114042428 4.http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Biology-Man-4-114133696 5.http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Biology-Man-5-114340436 6.http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Bio ... -114481163 Word Documents for Print: p.1-5(963 KB)- http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=6fe467ac6a98fd42d2db6fb9a8902bda Cheers folks. Enjoy the carboxyl pistols. Doesn't play runescapes anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 Not very funny but a good story line and stuff... :thumbup: I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vulcant Posted February 28, 2009 Author Share Posted February 28, 2009 Not very funny but a good story line and stuff... :thumbup: Well I've tried plenty of times to make gag strips and whatnot but the main thing is that i like biology man and making it. Making a comic with a plot is a lot easier for me. Doesn't play runescapes anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rangeor Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 The plot was pretty good I guess, but PLEASE don't use chatspeak in any more of your comics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braindead Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 I didn't get what was funny.. Cooking cape achived 25.06.2008 19:12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 To tell the truith,stickmen are pretty much the best art you can get out of me.And Biology Man seems to be a rather sophisticated stickman. so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted February 28, 2009 Share Posted February 28, 2009 http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/ Really useful. :thumbup: I think your comic needs a lot of work. First of all, spelling/grammar. At least type a full stop at the end of your sentences, I know it's only a small issue, but it makes the whole thing look really sloppy. Also, it may just be me, but in most of the panels I really have no idea what's going on. There's simply too much text and everything seems really chaotic. As pointed out before, using leetspeak isn't a good idea either. It doesn't make the story any funnier, it's just annoying. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vulcant Posted March 1, 2009 Author Share Posted March 1, 2009 Page Six is up: http://vulcant13.deviantart.com/art/Bio ... -114481163 I finished it rather late. I have looked at your critiques and i will try to improve with them but just keep in mind I aim to please my friends at school. I'd get pneumonia if i opened the window and tried to please everyone. Doesn't play runescapes anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 ^ You don't have to please everyone, but don't use it as an excuse for not changing anything (not saying that's what you're doing). And you could try to please more people than just your friends at school, who probably aren't the most art-educated people in the world and are biased anyway, simply because they're your friends. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 Sorry but I don't think your friends know what makes a web comic good. Really, take the hint with the link I posted please. Your web comic in its current form is horrible. You have issues with flow, storyline issues (it sucks), chat bubble issues (they are sometimes in the wrong order and conversations get confusing), the paneling is either dead boring like the last one or is so convoluted and confusing that it doesn't make a damn ounce of sense and, to be quite honest, I haven't even cracked a smile reading all of this mess. READ IT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vulcant Posted March 1, 2009 Author Share Posted March 1, 2009 ^ You don't have to please everyone, but don't use it as an excuse for not changing anything (not saying that's what you're doing). And you could try to please more people than just your friends at school, who probably aren't the most art-educated people in the world and are biased anyway, simply because they're your friends. Alright, I'll try not to :) I do have one friend who is pretty frigging art savvy. I draw anything else besides bio man and he can always find something wrong. In fact he finds stuff wrong in Biology Man too but friends and family are biased. Holy [cabbage] Nadril. I have looked at it, okay? Maybe it is horrible but seriously don't expect a drastic changes in the comic after looking at the site. To be honest, you seem to be the poster child of an overly serious scaper who is dead on the inside and only finds dry pleasure in totally ripping on people like me. Doesn't play runescapes anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 Or maybe I'm just an artist hoping to help other artists become better. *Shrug* Have fun with the horrible web comic. I won't bother you anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil_mumm_ra Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Or maybe I'm just an artist hoping to help other artists become better. *Shrug* Have fun with the horrible web comic. I won't bother you anymore. What's your art exactly? i've never quite gotten it, 3d designs or something then, right? posting a link doesn't qualify you to tell him his webcomic is horrible. your words aren't so much helpful, as they are just biting and rude. being rude doesn't help someone become better, guidance does. post a link isn't really guidance in much of a form. it's a start though. if i had any advice for webcomic artists, i'd sure post it here, i've got no expertise with webcomics though. His comic could use some work, i'm not denying that. the Leetspeak shouldn't be used, or should be used minimally for comic effect, the storyline could use a bit of work, and yeah, the overall flow of his pieces could also use some adjustment so that they flow properly and have some direction. being rude doesn't help him with these things. his webcomic isn't great, but it's not horrible either. [hide=WOO TEXT! updated Jan 19, 2009 (last quote)] And Evil you mad bastard. You are definately bringing TET back up to it's glory. No doubt about it. Keep it going champ.24,485th to 99 defence on 7-23-08I always forget you're 20 too. I always think you're 25 or something. o.oYa think that I'm insane, Its not sane... its not saneobligitory devart link: http://evil-mumm-ra.deviantart.com/Pogonophobia is the fear of beards.She isn't naked so it's legal.I'm a porn star.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Or maybe I'm just an artist hoping to help other artists become better. *Shrug* Have fun with the horrible web comic. I won't bother you anymore. What's your art exactly? i've never quite gotten it, 3d designs or something then, right? posting a link doesn't qualify you to tell him his webcomic is horrible. your words aren't so much helpful, as they are just biting and rude. being rude doesn't help someone become better, guidance does. post a link isn't really guidance in much of a form. it's a start though. if i had any advice for webcomic artists, i'd sure post it here, i've got no expertise with webcomics though. His comic could use some work, i'm not denying that. the Leetspeak shouldn't be used, or should be used minimally for comic effect, the storyline could use a bit of work, and yeah, the overall flow of his pieces could also use some adjustment so that they flow properly and have some direction. being rude doesn't help him with these things. his webcomic isn't great, but it's not horrible either. You pretty much just told him his comic sucked. I did it in a few words, you did it in a paragraph. The website I linked is infinitely more helpful. As far as my art goes I have done about anything you can think of in my 8 years of digital art (not to even include the 6 years before that in which I drew a lot). I'm focused on 3D design right now but I've dabbled in pretty much any artistic style you could think of. Anyways I would like to say I have a good idea of what makes a good and bad web comic so, well, yeah. Maybe this will help. I'll link a bunch of great web comics, and a bunch of crap web comics. Inspiration and all that. Great: Pictures for Sad Children (Some of them are harder to get but some are just gold) Penny Arcade (The only good video game web comic IMO) The Perry Bible Fellowship (One of the best ever made) Cyanide and Happiness (has its ups and downs) Dr McNinja (I don't really read it but it seems to be a style you would be interested in) Crap: Ctrl-Alt-Del (easily one of the worst ever made) XKCD (This crap isn't funny) VG Cats (sucks and lolfurrys) Just a few examples off the top of my head. Anyways yeah I said I wasn't going to post here again, oops. Maybe this is more helpful or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rangeor Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Crap:XKCD (This crap isn't funny) That's rather subjective don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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