IDK what to do with this damn thing. :wall:

 

Good as is?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, i got rid of the distorment, anything else?

 

 

 

I dont whatever you did to his right shoulder and right hand.

ok....more help pls

His left thumb sort of merges in with the background.

 

 

 

Come to think of it, he doesn't really stand out from the background.. is there a way to make him stand out from the background?

I think it's time you used high quality stocks. It's good that you are using football ones, but they don't tend to be the best. Look at sites such as http://bestgamewallpapers.com/ (that fact that it is for games is irrelevant, they have awesome stocks on there, long as you don't mind searching for a bit.) Try using renders too.

 

 

 

Onto your signature:

 

The effects are quite messy. There is a terrible glow on the footballer, that is distracting. The focal is, well there isn't one. There isn't much flow in it. Text is distracting. Maybe lower the opacity on it a little.

 

Sorry if that seemed really harsh, but that is my way of C/C. Picking out the stuff that needs improving, so you can get better quicker.

Stop doing football players >_>

 

 

 

I know it's good to emphasise flow, which you've pretty much got the hang of, but you need to try something different :)

Nah, don't worry ouchy, I really appreciate any help that comes from someone who knows their stuff. I'm still a rockie at this, and criticism is my friend.

 

 

 

Littleboy, I like sport renders, mid action renders have a natural flow (which i some how ALWAYS mess up), and are more interesting to me than something like a girl with duct tape on her mouth or something.

I'm saying that you should try it with renders that don't give you an obvious way to make flow.