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Try thinner pentoolings.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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The lady stands out too much. Blend it?

 

And the pentoolings are not too nice right now. Try shading them a bit?

 

 

 

And most of all, the model you picked is not too pretty. ;)

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So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends.

 

RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.

Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.

Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.

I strike out every other week.

Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.

Randox pretty much stays rational.

Etc, etc

 

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The lady stands out too much. Blend it?

 

And the pentoolings are not too nice right now. Try shading them a bit?

 

 

 

And most of all, the model you picked is not too pretty. ;)

 

 

 

:lol:

 

 

 

I agree though, not a huge fan of the effects in there. The pentoolings just seem very large and chunky compared to the other background effects. The coloured lighting works pretty well as always, but other than that it just doesn't appeal to me. IMO, it would be good if you tried something completely different from your usual work, since there's only so much you can do with a person stock and some resources.

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I'm starting to think you just always feel the need to put some stock image or game image in something of yours even if it isn't needed, littleboy. Honestly it feels sort of lazy and slopped on at the moment.

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I'm starting to think you just always feel the need to put some stock image or game image in something of yours even if it isn't needed, littleboy. Honestly it feels sort of lazy and slopped on at the moment.

 

 

 

 

 

Mhmm, I agree. I want to do more stuff myself but I can't motivate myself.

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