Jason321 Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 Haven't posted a sig for C/C here in a while. Anyways, as you may or may not know I've been trying to experiment to get better because I haven't seen myself improve in months. Here goes: Just trying a few things. What should I add/change? Any advice would be great :) Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 The canvas size is nice. Add effects now though, because it looks like a WIP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason321 Posted May 27, 2009 Author Share Posted May 27, 2009 What effects, though? Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 Looks really great Lovely use of grappas! Needs more "solid" effects. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 Someone give me a link to this grappa thing :P danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 grappa? :anxious: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 http://www.hotflyer.btinternet.co.uk/gr ... ppaRB.html I like it, but it does look like a WIP. I'd add some yellow-ish effects, some shapes and clipping masks. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason321 Posted May 28, 2009 Author Share Posted May 28, 2009 Thanks a lot guys. Yeah I agree it does look a lot like a WIP so I'm going to take in the feedback you have all given me and try to improve it :) I'm going to work on it when I'm not busy with a lot of other stuff on my plate :P Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 There's no flow. The black lines are all the lines taken by the fractal in the background, they're all over the place. The white is blank space which doesn't work particularly well. Also I cropped it, I think the original is far too wide. There's unorthodox canvas sizes, but you need to push the limits, not ignore them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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