Haven't posted a sig for C/C here in a while. Anyways, as you may or may not know I've been trying to experiment to get better because I haven't seen myself improve in months. Here goes:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just trying a few things. What should I add/change? Any advice would be great :)

The canvas size is nice. Add effects now though, because it looks like a WIP.

What effects, though?

Looks really great Lovely use of grappas! Needs more "solid" effects.

Someone give me a link to this grappa thing :P

grappa? :anxious:

http://www.hotflyer.btinternet.co.uk/gr ... ppaRB.html

 

 

 

I like it, but it does look like a WIP. I'd add some yellow-ish effects, some shapes and clipping masks.

Thanks a lot guys. Yeah I agree it does look a lot like a WIP so I'm going to take in the feedback you have all given me and try to improve it :) I'm going to work on it when I'm not busy with a lot of other stuff on my plate :P

There's no flow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

The black lines are all the lines taken by the fractal in the background, they're all over the place.

 

The white is blank space which doesn't work particularly well.

 

 

 

Also I cropped it, I think the original is far too wide. There's unorthodox canvas sizes, but you need to push the limits, not ignore them.