Hobgoblinpie Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 These will probably be my last Panoramas until I get my new Camera, so I thought I'd get some C&C now. I would like to be honest, but to a degree. Don't tell me it's [cabbage], tell me why you don't like it and how I can improve my work to be better next time. I do acknowledge that there is a distinct lack of 'focusing points', points which draw your eyes in, and I will be adjusting that soon enough, perhaps doing something like Littleboy with the people on the right. All images have a DeviantArt link, where you can view the fullsize version if you wish to do so (when on the DeviantArt page, click the 'download' button on the left side of the image). [hide=][/hide] DevArt Link [hide=][/hide] DevArt Link [hide=][/hide] DevArt Link POH Agility Course, Please Support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rangeor Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 I really like the second one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obfuscator Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Wow I LOVE the third one, the second is great too :) "It's not a rest for me, it's a rest for the weights." - Dom Mazzetti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 The second one is great! Lovely balance of colours, and I love the way it looks like it's been taken with a fisheye lens :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobgoblinpie Posted July 6, 2009 Author Share Posted July 6, 2009 Thanks. When I get my new camera I'm going to try and make the panoramas more interesting (I get it Next Saturday, 18th July). POH Agility Course, Please Support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humus Posted July 8, 2009 Share Posted July 8, 2009 Th first is the best. The colours win it for me. Second is a bit boring, and the third focusses too much on the clouds; the land draws your eyes away from it. Nice work, though :P Resources / My Photos / INSPIRATION BLAWG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted July 8, 2009 Share Posted July 8, 2009 Third one feels weird, dark colors but also a nice blue sky second one is my favorite [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenslime89 Posted July 11, 2009 Share Posted July 11, 2009 I like the first one but the transition from silhouettes to the sky seems pretty sudden, have you thought of softening it slightly in PS? I love the second one, it's very different from the run of the mill panoramas where it's moody skies and mists. My computer isn't loading the third one just now so I'll check back later and see if it will load it later. Good stuff! Photos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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