In April i did this for a friend

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i remade it and did this in August

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but today i saw some flaws like the character size people said about i went back on there cc

 

 

 

and with the great guidance of terley and the busyness of MXM i changed the char

 

 

 

 

 

 

chain added

 

 

 

 

 

 

whip added

 

 

 

 

 

 

ammy changed and other changes and additions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you have anything i could add to it please tell or if i can change anything or rate it tyvm :)

i give it a 8/10

well my crits would be about the character,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

plus a more feminine face still, make more to the center of the face.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice ones, i like em! :D

only thing I'd could say tht hasn't been said before, is the hand holding the maul (????) its the wrong way round, it should go behind the handle

chain added at their request, and hand changed

muhc better, definately getting there

anything else you can see wrong? or adding?

i'm ready for ratings on finished product and additions that you may want to add to sig ty

You should of put the maul over her shoulder

You should of put the maul over her shoulder

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

she juts hit the noob into the ground with it, of course its not over her shoulder

Then why is the "noob" on the other side of the river

because a maul has a long handle and its only a narrow river

any ideas on how to improve the sig??

make the cat black :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i (L) black cats!

nice, but wouldn't she be looking at the noob that she just hit, and the smile is like weird lol, it looks as if she's bored or something, but if thats what ure aiming at :? its nice though

any ideas or cc to improve or ratings?

chain added on ammy, any crits please? i need ideas and ratings!