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I just have to say this, You sir, are a very good songwriter, I read all the lyrics, sorta did my own singing to it, and stuff, and even in my voice, it sounds exceptional, I just cannot explain how brilliant, and even, touching the lyrics are, I just cannot explain how good they are, you sir, get two thumbs up =D> :thumbsup: =D>

 

And i'd say it 100 more times, but dont want to get banned from this forum for spamming :-P :smile: it is brilliant.

 

Oh and i forgot, Kirby ftw :mrgreen:

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You should consider making songs. I'll help you out/make some instrumentals for you if you want.

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Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

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Camera guy: runs away still laughing

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If you're not too versatile, you should consider sequencers. You choose your instruments, you write your melodies and stuff, and the computer plays it for you. That's what I use for my mixes.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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Download FL Studio. It's really easy to use for beginners.

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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Okay, Personal favourites are -:

 

White Flags

Circles

Broken Promises

Forgotten

My World.

 

As for the untitled one, I suggest calling it. something along the lines of " Your Damaging ", " Don't Try to Deny the Damage You've Done", or "Destroyed"

Personally, I think that " Destroyed " would be more fitting, i like the untitled one aswell ^_^

 

~JimTheRev

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Okay, Personal favourites are -:

 

White Flags

Circles

Broken Promises

Forgotten

My World.

 

As for the untitled one, I suggest calling it. something along the lines of " Your Damaging ", " Don't Try to Deny the Damage You've Done", or "Destroyed"

Personally, I think that " Destroyed " would be more fitting, i like the untitled one aswell ^_^

 

~JimTheRev

 

Thanks... I'll probally name it something along the lines of that. And I just wrote a song in about 7 minutes...Hmm, I wonder if it's any good. *Hint hint*

 

Oh, and me and you are so writing a song sometime together.

Totally :D I live in the UK, so the time-zones are a bit different ( like 6 hours if you live in the USA)

But yeah, I'm usually on most of the time

Whenever you wanna start writing just pm or what ever. lol

 

~JimTheRev

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How about "Head in the Sand" for the untitled one?

Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can

Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude?

Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you?

Camera guy: still laughing

Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy

Camera guy: runs away still laughing

Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down

Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]!

Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!

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You are quite good for your age, but the lack of maturity does show. You've definitely got the potential to really grow up and write fantastic lyrics; my biggest criticism right now is that they are all kind of samey, and some of them are quite cliché and cheesy. I think if you changed up your themes and styles a little more, you would really be on the path to becoming a decent lyricist.

 

Keep it going.

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woohoo! songs ftw! i can just tell they are gonna be awesome!

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'Sup man, I aint been on recently cause of my internet messing up, but it was working well enough for me to have a good read through your songs, ( The new ones atleast). All I can say is that A) I really did enjoy writing songs with you, and B) Keep up the good work bud :^_^: :wink: =D>

Yours Awesomely,

JimTheRev

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