February 4, 201016 yr I just have to say this, You sir, are a very good songwriter, I read all the lyrics, sorta did my own singing to it, and stuff, and even in my voice, it sounds exceptional, I just cannot explain how brilliant, and even, touching the lyrics are, I just cannot explain how good they are, you sir, get two thumbs up =D> :thumbsup: =D> And i'd say it 100 more times, but dont want to get banned from this forum for spamming :-P :smile: it is brilliant. Oh and i forgot, Kirby ftw :mrgreen: Edited February 4, 201016 yr by JimTheRev
February 13, 201016 yr You should consider making songs. I'll help you out/make some instrumentals for you if you want. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!
February 13, 201016 yr If you're not too versatile, you should consider sequencers. You choose your instruments, you write your melodies and stuff, and the computer plays it for you. That's what I use for my mixes. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!
February 14, 201016 yr Download FL Studio. It's really easy to use for beginners. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!
February 14, 201016 yr Okay, Personal favourites are -: White FlagsCirclesBroken PromisesForgottenMy World. As for the untitled one, I suggest calling it. something along the lines of " Your Damaging ", " Don't Try to Deny the Damage You've Done", or "Destroyed"Personally, I think that " Destroyed " would be more fitting, i like the untitled one aswell ^_^ ~JimTheRev
February 14, 201016 yr Okay, Personal favourites are -: White FlagsCirclesBroken PromisesForgottenMy World. As for the untitled one, I suggest calling it. something along the lines of " Your Damaging ", " Don't Try to Deny the Damage You've Done", or "Destroyed"Personally, I think that " Destroyed " would be more fitting, i like the untitled one aswell ^_^ ~JimTheRev Thanks... I'll probally name it something along the lines of that. And I just wrote a song in about 7 minutes...Hmm, I wonder if it's any good. *Hint hint* Oh, and me and you are so writing a song sometime together.Totally :D I live in the UK, so the time-zones are a bit different ( like 6 hours if you live in the USA) But yeah, I'm usually on most of the timeWhenever you wanna start writing just pm or what ever. lol ~JimTheRev
February 14, 201016 yr How about "Head in the Sand" for the untitled one? Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!
February 20, 201016 yr You are quite good for your age, but the lack of maturity does show. You've definitely got the potential to really grow up and write fantastic lyrics; my biggest criticism right now is that they are all kind of samey, and some of them are quite cliché and cheesy. I think if you changed up your themes and styles a little more, you would really be on the path to becoming a decent lyricist. Keep it going. Steam | Soup | Last.fm
February 27, 201016 yr I be jealous of some of these songs. But you just inspired me to put my own up, so I can forgive the fact you're better than me! =D>
March 14, 201016 yr woohoo! songs ftw! i can just tell they are gonna be awesome! Youtube account: Earthgragonsage; currently uploading not an effing thing.[hide=Memorable Crossroads Quotes.]Reigan: NO MOOSE CAN SAVE US NOW; ...Had that been taken out of context, it would have been comical... Right now, it's terrifying.[/hide]
April 2, 201016 yr 'Sup man, I aint been on recently cause of my internet messing up, but it was working well enough for me to have a good read through your songs, ( The new ones atleast). All I can say is that A) I really did enjoy writing songs with you, and B) Keep up the good work bud :^_^: :wink: =D> Yours Awesomely, JimTheRev
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