Solartide Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 (edited) Critique my render please. Original: http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7315/a21g.jpg Truly, you gotta post your render somewhere before submitting it to the world, I caught 3 major mistakes already since I made the topic. Edited April 19, 2010 by Solartide Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shangdi Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Well I don't see anything amiss. :) [hide=A funny conversation]Me:Have u wondered how my brassard, which leaves my chest bare, give about the same def as ur pile of rocks?Friend:HahahaFriend:Maybe you are just good at blocking with your shoulder?Me:Ahahahahaha[/hide]Rare drops: 4 D legs, 1 D skirtBarrows items: 2 Verac's helms, 1 Dhorak's Greataxe, 1 Dhorak's platelegs, 2 Karil's leathertops, 1 Karil's crossbow, 1 Guthan's chainskirt Quest cape achieved 28 Dec, 2009, lost with Nomad's Requiem, re-obtained on 19 Mar 2010. Fire cape achieved 1 Nov 2010. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solartide Posted April 19, 2010 Author Share Posted April 19, 2010 Actually, left side of the belt doesn't look smooth to me, same for you? And I think the hair sticking out could use a finer cut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny_TeamDan Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Better than what i prolly would have done xD and yeah the hair sticking out a lil might be done a lil better. Other than that looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solartide Posted April 19, 2010 Author Share Posted April 19, 2010 Alright, newer version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevepole Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 All you did to this was crop it right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solartide Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 Yeah, just a lot of cropping. inb4 lock for "not having any of my own work". I could throw in a stock, some smudges, and some text, but that would devalue the image tenfold. As it is right now people can use the render. If I modify it, people will need to render it themselves, wasting everyone's time. Case in point: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 There's still white up there. :s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solartide Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 Not sure what you did right there, but this is what it looks like on a pure black layer: I mean, if you're going into paint and filling it with black, all renders will have that white outline due to feathering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soa Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 It being feathered is probably what it is then. I just saved the image and opened it in paint which automatically turned it black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 The logo is a bit iffy. Otherwise nice render. I'll leave this open as I think resources SHOULD be shared. Regardless, we do have a special place for resources, but you are asking for critique on them, so that justifies it in my opinion. Not sure if you got that, but i'll leave this open. Nice render ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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