November 19, 200520 yr Oh beer... why must you torment her so? The story was actually pretty nice! :D i'll never look at a glass of beer the same way again... :shock: The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak. In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice.
November 19, 200520 yr That was really good. Keep it up :D |Noobs :roll:|Ebaums steals! :evil:|Go Stephie! :mrgreen:|http://
November 19, 200520 yr Author thks peeps!! i didnt expect so much positive feedback, because one guy in the general forum said it was too long and too boring. but i know there are little errors in it, and i will try to fixem.
November 19, 200520 yr like I what ive said, some people here cant be bothered with literature... Its really nice, you should add more :wink: The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak. In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice.
November 20, 200520 yr its great lol i had the same experience with burnt lobsters (dont ask just dont ask) Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it!
November 22, 200520 yr Lol I'd get into but then I'd be thread hijacking this great story and it's a story for another time. Oh yeah in the next part is Sake Samurai going to give her good ol' pal Abbyssal Reaper some of the 10mil :D just kidding but if you want to give me always remember ill put it to good use (:twisted: *starts laughing diabolicaly* Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it!
November 22, 200520 yr The only story in Varrock Library I have read this year better than this one has been Gaal and Smoke...only because I am addicted to them. Wow, I applaud you. This is definately one of the better works here. My heart is broken by the terrible loss I have sustained in my old friends and companions and my poor soldiers. Believe me, nothing except a battle lost can be half so melancholy as a battle won. -Sir Arthur Wellesley
November 23, 200520 yr Author hey peeps, i fixed some of the little errors, except for teh head wizards name and the spelling of "abrury" besides that, i have noticed a few errors on the subject of alcohohol. so i am writing another story!!!(because i cant think of anything original) so writers block can be bye-bye. aaaannnnd! this is the last time i will bump this topic. adios peeps. Kah bah gee(im such a poser)
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