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Hey, I'm making a full dragon pixel, I have the top half done, but the legs are really peeving me. I just can't seem to get them:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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LydellSiggycopy.png Original

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He will be in the air, kicking an abyssal demon, but I need anyone to give me a reference for the legs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C&C welcome too.

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Sorry to doublepost, but I updated it. My monitor is a bit weird atm, so I apologise if the colours are off. Thanks for the pics Terley.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MD666, all the ref pics I can find of the sheild show me no edging (I added it ause I thought it would look stupid without edging), and the dragon is black on all the ones I've seen. Do you have a specific pic that you were refering to?

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erm nice one thing in official rs te sheild is on the left hand but this is your sig do as you please.

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I fixed the sheild. Update is in the first post :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm gonna start working on the abby demon now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT:: It took me about 2 hours I reckon. Time flies when you are ill :evil:

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Nice, tho i believe the reason you "can't get the legs" is because ur toon has legs which are the same length as his chest, way out of proportion

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That was posted before I posted the first update. I think the technical term is foreshortening, but I have never taken any art classes. Any advice? Sorry for no update, been REALLY ill lately. I'll try to post one later.

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Here's a couple things that could be changed:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) The dragon chain looks like dragonhide, not chainmail.

 

 

 

2) The feet and legs need work, but you know that.

 

 

 

3) The shield is too far down, so I'm not sure how it's staying on his arm.

 

 

 

4) What kind of sword/weapon is that?

 

 

 

5) He doesn't have a mouth...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, looks pretty good so far. Get well soon!

- Np Tyler

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Here's a couple things that could be changed:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) The dragon chain looks like dragonhide, not chainmail.

 

 

 

2) The feet and legs need work, but you know that.

 

 

 

3) The shield is too far down, so I'm not sure how it's staying on his arm.

 

 

 

4) What kind of sword/weapon is that?

 

 

 

5) He doesn't have a mouth...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, looks pretty good so far. Get well soon!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. Dragon hide doesnt have like horns on shoulders,

 

 

 

2. True

 

 

 

3. I dont see it

 

 

 

4. a whip....

 

 

 

5. A beard is covering it i guess....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink:

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Here's a couple things that could be changed:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) The dragon chain looks like dragonhide, not chainmail.

 

 

 

2) The feet and legs need work, but you know that.

 

 

 

3) The shield is too far down, so I'm not sure how it's staying on his arm.

 

 

 

4) What kind of sword/weapon is that?

 

 

 

5) He doesn't have a mouth...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, looks pretty good so far. Get well soon!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. Dragon hide doesnt have like horns on shoulders,

 

 

 

2. True

 

 

 

3. I dont see it

 

 

 

4. a whip....

 

 

 

5. A beard is covering it i guess....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) I'm not sure what you mean, but I meant that his d-chain looks like dragonhide

 

 

 

2) Umm...

 

 

 

3) His arm should be perpendicular to the shield, but it's not and it doesn't look quite right

 

 

 

4) It looks purple... I don't know, there's not enough to tell

 

 

 

5) I guess, but you should still see at least a line

- Np Tyler

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Been ill, and working on the TIP IT city pixel, but I got around to pointing out some things based on some comments:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LydellSiggyPickout.png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The yellow arrows are the light, I figured that's how it would fall. Green, is stuff I plan to correct.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And he doesn;t have a mouth or a bread, I was hoping someone would point out that he had a facemask on:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Unfortunately all your major problems are with the proportions, anatomy, and perspective.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As a suggestion I'd say you should start simple and try to sketch out your pieces beforehand, especially for complex drawings like the human figure, and especially when it's in such a difficult pose. Get some critiques on it and fix it up before starting on the rest.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just remember to work with baby steps, and don't take any dangerous leaps (ie: detailing before you've finished linework). :)

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Sorry Emon, I'm making it for a friend who is aiming for 85 slayer (83 atm, I better hurry up lol).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the critique venomai. I like to sketch things out beforehand, but the lack of a scanner is a problem. I'm getting a graphics tablet soon (7 days!!!!!!!) but I think scaners are better for this kind of thing. Can you recommend any sites so I can work on anatomy?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As a side note, I wubs your Dumbledore theory :mrgreen:

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