so manny of us f2pers want to know the best way to make money. when you become a member there is a rather usefull skill called herblore the art of making potions now training herblore can be very expensive due to the fact that more often than not you need to buy all your ingreedients however there is an ingredient called the wine of zamorak normally used in the making of ranged potions. now why am i talking about members stuff for making monney in ftp? because the wine in question is f2p in fact it spawns just north of the goblin village in a chaos temple all you need is an air staff or catlins staff as it now provides infinate air runes and 1 more magic attack than the f2p staves at the cost of 1 magic defense now all you need is 33 magic for telegrab and a whole lot of law runes ( you make aprox 1k per telegrab. simply cast telekenetic grab on the wine and yo turn 200 gp into 1200 gp. If you arent grabbing the wine keep this im mind when grabbing against other players 1 distance dosent maatter the guy standing 1 space away grabs no faster than the guy 10 spaces away 2 timing does matter if you are faster you grab first HOWEVER it the two of you grab on the same rs click then another system will chose who gets the wine i dont exactly know what its based on but it may have something to do with magic levels or the alphabetical order of the names.

 

have fun selling wine on the ge max price often sells instantly but if not try medium price

Spaces. Paragraphs. Commas.

Thank you, this helped me out a lot.

Spaces. Paragraphs. Commas.

 

And spelling.

 

Ah, yes. Forgot that.

 

And Pictures

And a topic substantial enough to require a whole guide and not just a mere sentence.

 

Actually, throw in enough pictures/spaces/paragraphs/commas, we suddenly have something that might be substantial enough to consider a guide. Oh, and completely failing to mention that the zamorak mages attack you, usually preventing you from grabbing it 'till they're all dead and you take damage every time you pick up wine?

Nearest bank? Low/high risk? Profit per hour?

 

Lots of things this tip failed to mention. Don't even get me started on how you write stuff...

Constructive criticism is of course welcome and encouraged but hostile, sarcastic, pointless and/or generally unhelpful posts are not permitted. Please only post if you have advice on how to improve the guide and present it in a polite and constructive fashion.

To be fair all the posts you removed do fall into the bounds on constructive criticism.

 

Having proper spelling, paragraphs and grammar would improve the guide.

Having pictures would improve the guide.

Having more to the guide so its not just a vague sentence (eg covering the zammy mages that attack more detail on location, profit margins etc) and has substance too it would improve the guide.

 

Also given the brevity of the posts I fail to see how they can be deemed "hostile, sarcastic, pointless and/or generally unhelpful" while "Don't even get me started on how you write stuff... " is not deemed to be hostile. Atleast the removed posts all had something that genuinely would improve the guide and unless you wish to read them a certain way did not really say anything pointless, hostile or sarcastic.

Just posting "spelling" or "and pictures" or essentially saying that he should write a guide completely about something else isn't really helpful. While those suggestions could be constructively given, people building upon each others' quotes and providing like two words to demonstrate what is "wrong" with the guide is far from the best way to go about it and seems more like ganging up on the author to show the sheer volume of things that need to be done. Also, sarcastically proclaiming that this guide be moved to the AoW isn't helpful.

 

If you wish to discuss this more please contact me via PM, as to not clutter up this topic further ;)

You should use pictures, paragraphs, and put some time into correcting your spelling, punctuation, and syntax. You should also list the gp/hour and other important information like the best bank to use, etc.

 

/constructive criticism

Spaces. Paragraphs. Commas.

 

And spelling.

 

Ah, yes. Forgot that.

 

And Pictures

And a topic substantial enough to require a whole guide and not just a mere sentence.

 

Actually, throw in enough pictures/spaces/paragraphs/commas, we suddenly have something that might be substantial enough to consider a guide. Oh, and completely failing to mention that the zamorak mages attack you, usually preventing you from grabbing it 'till they're all dead and you take damage every time you pick up wine?

Actually, the whole point of TB is so the mages do not attack you and you don't take damage.