April 10, 201214 yr So I saw this quote, really liked it, and played with it in Photoshop. I made this out of randomness. Thoughts? Nani mo dekinaiChanto dekinaiSore ga dou shita?Bokura wa wakai'n daNanimo dekinaiSugu ni dekinaiDakara bokura ni kanou sei ga aru'n da ~AKB48
April 10, 201214 yr It is pretty simple, yet bold.As for me, I like my backgrounds to be really cluttered, so your piece isn't really my thing. It is nice though.
April 10, 201214 yr The difference in the personality of the two fonts makes this ambiguous. Is it gritty? Is it sleek? Is it stern? Is it forward-thinking? It looks like an Apple commercial did the naughty with an action video game commercial, nahmeans? Seriously, the font you use says about as much as the words you write in graphic design. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!
April 10, 201214 yr Texture to the background, maybe. Looks like a quote that would match a medieval style game or movie. So something like Immortals or Wrath of the Titans style.
April 10, 201214 yr The text is a little rough and spacing could be adjusted, also the background could be smoother, but overall it's a great start.
April 10, 201214 yr Yeah, try to run some kind of frosted glass effect to disperse the color blocks in the background. A blur might not work (no shades between shades), but a dither certainly will make things look smooth. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL!
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