Rate avy made myself

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That better be a first attempt.. Its needs a bit more shading and the outline of the whip (that neon green) is really like etchy, you need it to blend more with the background so you can the the pixels as much..

Looks very distorted to me, and the text just looks plonked anywhere.. good try at a whip tho, maybe too thick?

it was first time and its distorted cause its in gif or jpg i forgot in bmp it looks better.

save it as PNG. a First Timer is no excuse for it to be bad, but it is an excuse to get better. So dont take your crits too hard or youll make a wagon of yourself.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Text is bland, file type is bad, whip is too thick, cant tell if its shaded because its too distorted, either center or move your text right or left next time. Right now its leftish middle with tons of space above it. Not good.