razzzzzza Posted February 7, 2006 Share Posted February 7, 2006 Rate avy made myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted February 7, 2006 Share Posted February 7, 2006 That better be a first attempt.. Its needs a bit more shading and the outline of the whip (that neon green) is really like etchy, you need it to blend more with the background so you can the the pixels as much.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted February 8, 2006 Share Posted February 8, 2006 Looks very distorted to me, and the text just looks plonked anywhere.. good try at a whip tho, maybe too thick? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzzzzza Posted February 8, 2006 Author Share Posted February 8, 2006 it was first time and its distorted cause its in gif or jpg i forgot in bmp it looks better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted February 8, 2006 Share Posted February 8, 2006 save it as PNG. a First Timer is no excuse for it to be bad, but it is an excuse to get better. So dont take your crits too hard or youll make a wagon of yourself. Anyway. Text is bland, file type is bad, whip is too thick, cant tell if its shaded because its too distorted, either center or move your text right or left next time. Right now its leftish middle with tons of space above it. Not good. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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