There it is.... Rate it and give me suggestions.

i like it but the linework doesnt seem to fit 7/10

 

 

 

a lot like royalflush's style

Though if you think about it without the line work its really empty....

Though if you think about it without the line work its really empty....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats really true. If it didnt have the line work a lot of people would rate it low saying its empty with a pic of a girl.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice sig man. The line work is nice but the square beside the girl (line work) doesnt fit. Try something else. Overall good sig 8.5/10.

whos the girl?

it is pretty cool how the girl fits into the sigi dunno if thats easy to do but it sure looks cool.

The girl is someone I personally know and she wanted me to use her picture in one of my sigs.

ya it be empty with out line work but the linework you put in there not all of it seems to fit in

tell ur firend she pretty hot?

tell ur firend she pretty hot?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That has nothing to do with the sig.......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Aldeon I think the line work actually fits other then that 1 square beside her.

Heres one without the linework right by her....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heres one without the linework right by her....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A lot better :).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like how the colours blend (never said that before) they go really well.

they both have lines

lol rob... but one of them had lines right by where the brushing ends.... look at original post.

Bumpity Bumpers Bumpity do!

tell ur firend she pretty hot?

 

 

 

2 true...nice sig as well

 

 

 

u from uk? :lol:

U.S.A. actually good ol' Michigan :)

9/10. Very cool sig, i really like the blue and how matched the picture to the background and other objects. Good Job :D .

Thanks for your rates guys, but keep em' coming.

Hmm, well since I know this style a bit, Ill be a bit harsh.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its very plain. There are basically no colors other than blue. The linework is out of place, to bulky and doesn't fit the picture. The background around the girl is way too simple. It also lacks depth. It looks like it was made in 5 minutes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now, on the positive side. You have potential IMO :) . You've got the basics on the smudging. To get more depth (Thanks to FrothKahn on this tip :) ) Use more color layers, what I am trying is using both big and small airbrushes, with low intensities, and trying colors that are slighty different but mesh well. Also for the bg's, use more brushing. In the smudge behind the girl its too simple.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep trying. Its good to see people trying new things. Add me on MSN and we can chat more on this :wink: Gj man, for a first, its nice. :D

Well the point of it is simplicity, and the line work is to fill it. And since i was knew to it, took me about an hour. Though simplicity was the main key in it. Though I do understand where you are coming from I'll say this much, that its a sig that potrays my personal feelings for her and simplicty was used but beauty was more so achieved in my eyes. Thanks for your comment Royal you were the one I really wanted to hear from.

Well the point of it is simplicity, and the line work is to fill it. And since i was knew to it, took me about an hour. Though simplicity was the main key in it. Though I do understand where you are coming from I'll say this much, that its a sig that potrays my personal feelings for her and simplicty was used but beauty was more so achieved in my eyes. Thanks for your comment Royal you were the one I really wanted to hear from.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hmm, I understand the point of a simplistic look, but there is good simplistic and bad simplistic. I think if this sig were maybe a 300 X 75 it would make it look much better IMO. Im sure you know how to scale a picture down :wink: Also, try to make the linework a little bit smaller, not as bulky, and try to add more of it around the picture, and make it a bit more transparent.

 

 

 

:wink:

 

 

 

Also, aslong as you see the beauty in it, that is the only goal you should shoot for. No signature is ever bad, its all in the persons point of view.

8/10 nice work and i like the style :D however i don't like the linework much :? except for the lines around jake. hm you might want to try decreasing the height a bit maybe 10-15 pixels.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Took royal and swifty's advice and scaled down the height... I also had to scale down the width by 50 pixels so she didn't look bloated and i also decreased the opacity of the linework... Does it look better now?

hmm well i wouldn't have decreased the width or at least not so much, linework needs more variety.