Need YOUR Help!

[terley]

border it.

[lemonfish]

What needs done to it? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I also have a weird felling with it too, I just can't figure out what...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

have another wall from the right and more bunnies.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is one of my favourites overall as it uses very good colours and isn't just plain serious. Keep it up

[Fortress2000]

Right, I have tried to merge the sun a bit more...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tell me what you think:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[whoami]

you should put a range in 1st person view aiming at the warrior :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

too much cs...

[Sir_Alex85]

Lookin' good, except you can see some white through the trees.

[Fortress2000]

It's not white, it's blue, but okay, I'll change it to the same colour as the tree's.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CC please. 8)

[Fortress2000]

There, filled in the area in the trees. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[lemonfish]

Make the fence longer, add a second wall from the right and maybe slightly darken the grass or less contrast in the colours. Also texture on the front hill is much better than the back hills and you should add some shading, even if it's only a little, to the grass. Oh and more bunnies!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just a few suggestions but overall it's really nice. Sun needs to merge a bit more and maybe some more shading on the sun. I duno why but i've been following this post for ages :?:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gl in finishing it. Hope to bid on it if it's auctioned.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~ Lemonfish

[Jdprs]

Turning out to be pretty impressive for a 1st sig, its mostly landscape but it is pretty nice. I dont have any new segestions that havnt been segested, so anyway, good luck.

[terley]

border it.

[Fortress2000]

What colour of border?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, I also tried to merge the sun a bit more. Here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So, no new suggestions apart from border? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Must be something... I'll try and think, I'll tell yous later. :?

[calcal123]

change the clouds they look like there upside down :lol:

[Fortress2000]

The clouds are the right way up... :evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, I have now extened the fence a bit. Tell me if yous think this is any better. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Fortress2000]

Okay, thought of something. At the break in the wall, I'm going to leave a space, and continue the wall. That will cover some of the empty land near the middle right of the sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope it looks good! :lol:

[Fortress2000]

Right, added the other part of the wall now! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any better? Oh, and more CC please, I think this will turn out okay.... hopefully... :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Fortress2000]

Added a boulder now. Look up the first page, and it's there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it makes it a little bit better. CC please. :D

[Fortress2000]

No CC??? No help??? :?

[terley]

change the clouds they look like there upside down :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Clouds don't have any sense of up or down :roll: :lol: .. Clouds are just... clouds..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You could have been more creative with the clouds Fortress.. And the sun doesn't have to be in the top right of the screen, it seems like its just squeezed into to corner.. If it was there it'd be early or late in the day, with more oranginess to the sky.. I'd suggest you get rid of it, as if it was just off screen and work more on better clouds.. The internets always a good resource..

 

 

 

http://www.greatestcities.com/9259pic/3 ... sun_clouds

[lemonfish]

I'm still thinking less contrast on the grass, especially underneath the shadows.

[Fortress2000]

Okay, due to your reply (terley), I have decided to take a test on the red sky option. Tell me, is it any better, or was the blue one better? Oh, I'd like as many opinions as possible, since only one isn't really helpful... :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Remember, this is only a test, I stil have the original one in my album, so I can change back, just in case! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CC please. :twisted: lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Fortress2000]

Okay......... :evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A whole day, maybe 2 if you count nights, and STILL no one has ansered.... Please CC..... :( :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks! :twisted:

[terley]

you shouldn't rely on people to tell you what to do next, thats up to you.. The point of critisism is to improve what you've already done, theres no point asking;

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Ok I've drawn a wall, what next?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- improve the sky..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Ok, done, now what?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.. You have to simply read what people have to say and use the crits you've got to deduce for yourself.. Otherwise you'll be hopeless, theres no point of all that talent if you can't stand on your own two feet (metaphorically :P )..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the blue sky cus it suits the rest of the image, with a orange sky would emit an orangey light, plus everything would be more silhouetted (spelling?).. If you really desprately want the sun there, make it smaller, go outside (in day).. Is the sun really that big??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't see how you've spend so long on your first sig :?

[Fortress2000]

if you can't stand on your own two feet (metaphorically :P )..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(It's metaphorically speaking) :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, got your point. I have an idea for my next sig. I'm just going to sell this one off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for all the help everyone. :D