Well i've practiced enough. I'm going headfirst full force on this piece right here. I sketched out everything at school. It's just another average day in runescape. Not quite sure where the location is but it looks nice.

 

 

 

The sketch is of course better then the line because I had to resize it and everything but you get the idea. I'm hoping I can pull this off and make a nice decent piece out of it.

 

 

 

Sketch

 

 

 

 

Sketch outlined

 

 

 

 

Line Art

 

 

 

 

I'll be posting as my progress gross. In the meantime post your comments and good wishes. Thanks!

 

 

 

~Nick

 

 

 

 

 

Added some Color so it's easier on your eyes and to give a feel for what it's going to look like

 

 

 

 

 

 

Probably going to start dithering the trees and shade the charecters a bit

 

 

 

Finally I finished doing all my line work. I reworked the charectors a bit. I started shading a tree and I got rid of all the black lines. WHat do you guys think now?

The prob is that u outlined it free-hand, not pix by pix, so ur lines dont look nice and straight. Try to fix that.

 

 

 

Also the ppl look out of proportion and crooked.

 

 

 

Otherwise, nice.

The prob is that u outlined it free-hand, not pix by pix, so ur lines dont look nice and straight. Try to fix that.

 

 

 

Also the ppl look out of proportion and crooked.

 

 

 

Otherwise, nice.

 

 

 

Yea theres some lines I need to fix

 

 

 

The only person I think looks bad is the person in phat. His head is kinda crooked sideways lol

 

 

 

The demon is a bit off, i'll rework him later he looked bad from the sketch, so did the rabbit. The fish havent gotten much and also need work. Out of all I think the person on the tree is the best not only anamaticly but it's also my best charector so far :D

Ya your going in the right direction, just keep adding to it, alter characters if need be (some bits look a bit skew-wiff), add textures and maybe something more in the background..

 

 

 

Its a pretty large canvas so you've got a lot of work ahead of ya, can't wait to see how it comes out.. 5/10 so far, but its still a wip so who knows how it'll end out like. :wink:

Ya your going in the right direction, just keep adding to it, alter characters if need be (some bits look a bit skew-wiff), add textures and maybe something more in the background..

 

 

 

Its a pretty large canvas so you've got a lot of work ahead of ya, can't wait to see how it comes out.. 5/10 so far, but its still a wip so who knows how it'll end out like. :wink:

 

 

 

THe sketch orginally had clouds and trees on that hill which i'll probably add again. Grass is going to be the worst since i'm not quite sure how to texture it good. I'll probabaly add little stones, larger blades of grass, and more flowers, just little details to spruce it up.

the bottom part of the trees looks a lil... wierd

the bottom part of the trees looks a lil... wierd

 

 

 

It was meant to look like roots. I suppose I over did it. Thanks for pointing things like that out so i can fix them 8)

It's ok i guess... people look a bit blobby. And it needs some more texture. People are too small and it has too many blank spaces with just trees.

It's ok i guess... people look a bit blobby. And it needs some more texture. People are too small and it has too many blank spaces with just trees.

 

 

 

1. Havent work on human anatomy at all, besides these are my first charectors

 

2. I havent even started to shade/add texture. It will take awhile to finish it but it will look awsome

 

3. I havent finished adding details. Like I said before i'll probably add rocks, pebbles, flowers, blades of grass, insects, and so force to spruce up the bland empty spaces

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments though!