More work to rate for me guys :)

[Coffe73]

Just soem more sigs that ive been working on for the last few days... including my first use of apophysis :)

 

 

 

1)

 

 

I used sepia tone for this... I like it :)

 

 

 

 

 

2)

 

 

My first apophysis :) its allirght but not one of my better sigs

 

 

 

3)

 

 

Made this for a mate :) text is a little off but he likes it which is good enough for me

 

 

 

4)

 

 

This the last sig i have to show you... Another one of my baiscs lol :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok gusy thats it tell me what ya think

[Coffe73]

Just noticed that i forgot to put borders on 3 of them lol! woops my bad...

[namename]

Well 1 and 4 are the only good ones IMO, you need to work on cropping your renders alot better, as an example, number 3 looks very bad because the tank has all the leftover pixels.

 

 

 

7/10

 

 

 

Work on you'r renders and borders and good luck improving!

[woopidoo2]

Youve forgot alot of borders, thats essentail for an abstract.

 

 

 

You improved in your fonts-use, they look good

 

 

 

I can see pixels at the edges of the tank, thats a -.

 

 

 

I like the last one, border, (though I think a 1px border would look better)

 

and the background matches the render, which is cut out very good.

 

And the font, thats good to.

 

 

 

I only like the last one, 7,2/10 :wink:

[Coffe73]

Thnx Nami :) I have added borders to 1 and 3 but You can barely see the border on 1 lol

[Coffe73]

Thnx Woopidoo :D

[woopidoo2]

Youve forgot alot of borders, thats essentail for an abstract.

 

 

 

You improved in your fonts-use, they look good

 

 

 

I can see pixels at the edges of the tank, thats a -.

 

 

 

I like the last one, border, (though I think a 1px border would look better)

 

and the background matches the render, which is cut out very good.

 

And the font, thats good to.

 

 

 

I only like the last one, 7,2/10 :wink:

I thought I was the first one posting on this topic :lol:

[_k0m0d0_]

Number 3 and 4 has the same BG with diff colors... :?

 

And the first one needs more blending...

[Jdprs]

Number 1 is good, the rest arnt so great

[Vitalik]

Their all too simple. You need to work on the backgrounds more and perhaps make it look better by applying a gausian blur. The text is too simple also and looks bad you should blend it in more using blending options.

[Nazgul740]

They aren't bad good work on the first one like the guys above me said add borders :wink:

[Despaxes]

you need to make the make the renders fuse more with the BG, you also need to make better BG's, those are simple, and well, suck