Just soem more sigs that ive been working on for the last few days... including my first use of apophysis :)

 

 

 

1)

 

 

I used sepia tone for this... I like it :)

 

 

 

 

 

2)

 

 

My first apophysis :) its allirght but not one of my better sigs

 

 

 

3)

 

 

Made this for a mate :) text is a little off but he likes it which is good enough for me

 

 

 

4)

 

 

This the last sig i have to show you... Another one of my baiscs lol :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok gusy thats it tell me what ya think

Just noticed that i forgot to put borders on 3 of them lol! woops my bad...

Well 1 and 4 are the only good ones IMO, you need to work on cropping your renders alot better, as an example, number 3 looks very bad because the tank has all the leftover pixels.

 

 

 

7/10

 

 

 

Work on you'r renders and borders and good luck improving!

Youve forgot alot of borders, thats essentail for an abstract.

 

 

 

You improved in your fonts-use, they look good

 

 

 

I can see pixels at the edges of the tank, thats a -.

 

 

 

I like the last one, border, (though I think a 1px border would look better)

 

and the background matches the render, which is cut out very good.

 

And the font, thats good to.

 

 

 

I only like the last one, 7,2/10 :wink:

Thnx Nami :) I have added borders to 1 and 3 but You can barely see the border on 1 lol

Thnx Woopidoo :D

Youve forgot alot of borders, thats essentail for an abstract.

 

 

 

You improved in your fonts-use, they look good

 

 

 

I can see pixels at the edges of the tank, thats a -.

 

 

 

I like the last one, border, (though I think a 1px border would look better)

 

and the background matches the render, which is cut out very good.

 

And the font, thats good to.

 

 

 

I only like the last one, 7,2/10 :wink:

I thought I was the first one posting on this topic :lol:

Number 3 and 4 has the same BG with diff colors... :?

 

And the first one needs more blending...

Number 1 is good, the rest arnt so great

Their all too simple. You need to work on the backgrounds more and perhaps make it look better by applying a gausian blur. The text is too simple also and looks bad you should blend it in more using blending options.

They aren't bad good work on the first one like the guys above me said add borders :wink:

you need to make the make the renders fuse more with the BG, you also need to make better BG's, those are simple, and well, suck