June 14, 200620 yr CHAPTER ONE- My brothers and I I have two Runescape brothers, Xerox Blade (my oldest one) and Charlie Bru (The one between Xerox and me), One day, while I was playing with my new toy horsey, I saw Xerox Blade reaching out for dadÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s long dragon scimitar. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅIÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m off fighting, mum!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
June 17, 200620 yr okay its actually not bad Hitting babies is fun, yay! *Dances* \:D/ Been out of the loop for 2 years, fill me in?
June 17, 200620 yr Not bad but not good either it could be a little longer and it could be a little more discriptive.
June 17, 200620 yr Author Not bad but not good either it could be a little longer and it could be a little more discriptive. It's going to be continued. That was a mere beginning. As for the description, if there's too much, it gets so boring that you go back to read another one. AHA! But thanks for the comment anyway.
June 18, 200620 yr Not bad but not good either it could be a little longer and it could be a little more discriptive. It's going to be continued. That was a mere beginning. As for the description, if there's too much, it gets so boring that you go back to read another one. AHA! But thanks for the comment anyway. Put too little description and people will say "wow, they put no effort into this at all, I am not interested." Description = good... just don't overdo it...
June 19, 200620 yr Cute, but you just admitted you're evading a ban put into place by ForsakenMage. If you want compliments, post something intelligent.1st of all, I am YukkyDins but I got banned! I'm back as RoyalKing! A BRILLIANT piece of writing! I really enjoyed it! My Tip.It Times Articles (10 and counting) || The Varrock Library Author Index projectDo you dare to dream? - Part 19 added. || The Hospital (WIP) - New story!Necromagus looks like a viking ... with glasses.
June 19, 200620 yr And you'll get banned again. Hopefully on a more permanent basis. My Tip.It Times Articles (10 and counting) || The Varrock Library Author Index projectDo you dare to dream? - Part 19 added. || The Hospital (WIP) - New story!Necromagus looks like a viking ... with glasses.
August 30, 200619 yr I thought I was...eh cute for lack of better words. The story had me gripping my chair for HorseyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s well being. I enjoyed how emotional towards Horsey the character was. :D
Create an account or sign in to comment