pixel WIP

[rik]

this is wath i am currently wokin on. i know its not realy much and the clouds may look a little cartoony but its the first time since an half year that i pixel again...

 

 

 

oh well here it is:

 

 

 

 

please give c/c

[woopidoo2]

Alot to work on

 

 

 

make the mountains like they go in the water, now it seems like they float on it.

 

 

 

the sunbeams in one straight line,

 

the sand in one line, kind of a snake-shape

 

I see a very detailed sky, but you must look Very close to see it.

 

 

 

Good luck :wink:

[Grim_Jokes]

make the mountains like they go in the water, now it seems like they float on it.

 

 

 

THose would be clouds, I believe.

[born2die]

FIRST OF ALL DON'T SAVE AS JPEG

 

 

 

-thats nice a few things tough the clouds don't make them tough the water

 

are more like fluffy thing on a "horizontal" line. The bodem should be somehow almost hozintal. not totaly tough

 

 

 

- the sky and water ... I take it that you rae going for a "sunset" if u look up some pictures on the interenet and look at the foto's where the sun is on that hight u see that the sky is yellow-orange-redish. and the clouds should be darker or more redish... then the sky itself

 

 

 

-the highlight on the water is pretty good tough i like it maby only thing u could to there is the highlights closser to the vieuwer..... mmmm ... farther apart ? to create more of a wave look

 

 

 

-don't shade the sun to much is a lightsource...

 

 

 

hope these things help you while making your signature :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

here's is a little picture to illustraid what i mean on the clouds

 

 

edit damn first i say not save as .jpeg and then I do it myself so verry stupid lol :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

PS.: that sample isn't gonna stop people xD place it somewhere ells.

[rik]

FIRST OF ALL DON'T SAVE AS JPEG

 

 

to answer i didn't saved as jpeg! proporly photobucket saved it as jpeg...

 

 

 

but thanks for the cc i shall work on it.

 

 

 

edit: here is the png file:

[Despaxes]

no action no shading...no perspective....

 

 

 

no anything except like 5 seconds of work

 

 

 

1/10

 

 

 

the 1 because it might have potential