Well.. it's the first one i've ever made.. whatya think? How can i improve?

very good for your first one ehads could use some help but the shading is awsome

Yeah i spent ages trying to get the head to look remotely like it should ^_^

jaiks!!! thats a good first try! that skull looks a lil flat tho ...

 

 

 

and the face well... needs a very good doctor :lol:

*hires plastic surgeon*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fixed :D lol..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I made the character too small, so the face was small, which meant 1 pixel is huge and i couldnt made the lines smaller lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i need to make big characters :D

wow thats good for first.. smoke needs work, try and fade it out like trying to merge it with background somehow, and on the tree(which you did a very good job on) you might wanna add a big branch coming up from the middle ? kinda looks like a big guy sat on it and it got pushed down, and whats the thing on the far left? is it a cloud? if it is, should be a lil darker :P (sry if this sounds harsh, its really good sig, just wanna give pointers though!)

was meant to be the ice stuff in wild.. but if u want a cloud.. it's a cloud ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah i thought the smoke sucked.. but i couldnt think of what to do about it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I didn't wanna add too many branches because it would look too crowded =\

It's one of the ok pixel sigs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The only thing great about it is the sword..I really like it. The rest is ordinary.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10

What do you like about the sword? (im trying to learn what looks good, what doesnt, what i can improve on and how etc)

the fact that it actually looks like metal is enough for me to like it :)

Righteo, i'll work on making my metals to that effect :D

its pretty good for first try. Me not liking the round head , which everyone seems to do.

Good first try. I'm assuming you were inspired by some sigs of mine as I recognize some stuff in it that I specifically made in some of my sigs. I remember having the same dead guy, a smoke coming from the same shaded staff, and similar robe shading, and I notice a few other things. While it's a good sig, there are infinite ways to protray a mage kill, and a good sig maker can make all of them without having to look at something else. Keep up the good work.

Yeah i was inspired by what u did and had ago. I'm working on a second one now, on my own :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tis looking a wee deformed though lol :D

Good luck! its nice for your first pixel sig...

Thx :D